A Soul Amiss
A poem.35 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a beautiful, softly-flowing poem, EE, I love the different imagery your words give us, each stanza giving us something more. Your last stanza is a lovely way to finish it. Very well done! :)) Sandra xxx
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What a beautiful, softly-flowing poem, EE, I love the different imagery your words give us, each stanza giving us something more. Your last stanza is a lovely way to finish it. Very well done! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
Comment from lancellot
This is a very well written love poem. The reader can feel the awe, longing, and near worship of someone, perhaps beyond their reach. Yet, their perfection is almost beyond compare, and in the end, they are blessed with a simple kiss upon the wind. Great work.
notes:
As now across the {crystalĂ?} flow
- Editor issue here.
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This is a very well written love poem. The reader can feel the awe, longing, and near worship of someone, perhaps beyond their reach. Yet, their perfection is almost beyond compare, and in the end, they are blessed with a simple kiss upon the wind. Great work.
notes:
As now across the {crystalĂ?} flow
- Editor issue here.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
Comment from Ricky1024
I like the way this floats so well with the music at first and then in the very End.
Becoming a sweet kiss from a beautiful woman.
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed Sabbath Sunday.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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I like the way this floats so well with the music at first and then in the very End.
Becoming a sweet kiss from a beautiful woman.
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed Sabbath Sunday.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
Comment from Douglas Goff
This was absolutely gorgeous! Oddly, my favorite line was the first! Well thought out:
A lonely solitary sound
With voice still young and yet profound.
One catch:
As now across the crystalĂ? flow
Nice piece of work here!
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This was absolutely gorgeous! Oddly, my favorite line was the first! Well thought out:
A lonely solitary sound
With voice still young and yet profound.
One catch:
As now across the crystalĂ? flow
Nice piece of work here!
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
Y our poem is lovely and heart-touching. You do have one of those nasty computer glitches toward the end of the writing. Other than that, it is beautiful writing.
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Y our poem is lovely and heart-touching. You do have one of those nasty computer glitches toward the end of the writing. Other than that, it is beautiful writing.
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
