Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you have your first vote.

I bought my first mobile in dec2010 and that s when I started my rainbow collection.


My best photo I took about 5 years ago....... two rainbows just like those in your artwork.

I also love to lick dew and raindrops from petals and leaves.

And I have the luck to see in the far distance the Alps covered in snow.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022

Thanks!

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022

I am in two contests now.

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Very beautiful poem. I think there will no end in poetry describing the wondder of nature. The poem is nicely rhymed and very fluid.
Well done!!
Mario

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022

Thanks!

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Delightful! I could "see" it all with your bright and lilting descriptions. I even like the photo you chose to accompany your wonderful poem. I wish you luck in the contest and hope to see your name in the winner's circle!!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022

Thanks!

reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022

How do I write a poem that turns an animal into a human?

reply by Rachelle Allen on 13-Nov-2022

First, think of a human we would all know. Then, because you've got that gift of a "writer's imagination," ask yourself what kind of an animal he/she would be. For example, I look at Joe Biden and see billy goat. Donald Trump makes me think of a big, angry orangutan. I see Heidi Klum and think "Afghan Hound;" whereas Christie Brinkley, who's also tall and blonde and a model, makes me think "Maine coon cat." Does that help?

reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022

Maybe

reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022

Does it have to rhyme?

reply by Rachelle Allen on 13-Nov-2022

Nope; it can be free-verse. The rules say "any style."

reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022

Ok