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Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Robot Legacy"
a collection of phenomenally mundane work.

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Comment from royowen
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I love the idea of a suspended effigy of his former superior. While these scientists from somewhere "out there" are overseeing life on earth in its infancy of development, most imaginative Bill, this is different. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
    Thanks, Roy
reply by royowen on 12-Nov-2022
    Most welcome
reply by royowen on 12-Nov-2022
    Most welcome Bill
Comment from Zue65
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I am not really much into scifi plot but I enjoyed reading this post. The writer is really skilled in describing scenes that are better seen. But the craftmanship of the writer made it possible for the readers to visualize effectively what the author intended for the readers to see. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
    Thank you, nassus
Comment from Ulla
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Ah, so you did come up with a final chapter to this story, Bill. I liked the ending which put a smile on my face. An experimental cybernetic humanoid seems very appropriate in the short term. Lol. Ulla:)))

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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
    Thanks, Ulla