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Comment from Terry Broxson
Gretchen, I am sorry I missed this when you first posted it. It is a wonderful story, and I am delighted for you that it was selected for the Story of the Month contest. I am also sorry, I am out of sixes. Good luck in the contest! Terry.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Gretchen, I am sorry I missed this when you first posted it. It is a wonderful story, and I am delighted for you that it was selected for the Story of the Month contest. I am also sorry, I am out of sixes. Good luck in the contest! Terry.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much. This was the product of a middle of the night session with my Muse. I appreciate the virtual six as much as a real one. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I think it is a lovely story with many life lessons for everyone. So many of us are sad or unhappy about the things we don't have but learning to enjoy what we do makes life so much more enjoyable. I'd give you a six if I had one left.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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I think it is a lovely story with many life lessons for everyone. So many of us are sad or unhappy about the things we don't have but learning to enjoy what we do makes life so much more enjoyable. I'd give you a six if I had one left.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much. I am so happy you enjoyed the story. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I did. Good work. Thanks for sharing it.
Do i see the beginning of an extending relationship story here? A regular Nicholas Sparks thriller? (hah!)
Best wishes. Anxiously awaiting the shared meal!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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I did. Good work. Thanks for sharing it.
Do i see the beginning of an extending relationship story here? A regular Nicholas Sparks thriller? (hah!)
Best wishes. Anxiously awaiting the shared meal!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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I think there might be a possibility of another appearance of thosebtwo. Just not sure when. Thanks for the awesome review. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I made sure to save a six for Miranda since I haven't had one to reward some mighty fine writing over the course of the last couple weeks. But this story that you say may not be fantastic, sure is to me. True or not, I'm glad the two of you could take a few minutes for each other. I could sit there in the park every day watching my surrounds and chatting with nice people. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Well, I made sure to save a six for Miranda since I haven't had one to reward some mighty fine writing over the course of the last couple weeks. But this story that you say may not be fantastic, sure is to me. True or not, I'm glad the two of you could take a few minutes for each other. I could sit there in the park every day watching my surrounds and chatting with nice people. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Well, thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed this story and I'm especially glad you are enjoying Miranda. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
What a great story to impress on the reader the value of perspective - closed fist or open hand - and also the need for genuine gratitude. I thought your story was excellent, vivid and clealy told. Very impressive!
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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What a great story to impress on the reader the value of perspective - closed fist or open hand - and also the need for genuine gratitude. I thought your story was excellent, vivid and clealy told. Very impressive!
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much. I was up half the night with that one. I really appreciate this kind review. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
I hope other Fanstorians read this with their hands open. You add so much to this site, Gretchen. I just got used to your being 61 and working at a drug store and now I find you (Okay, Ryland) sitting beneath a Live Oak tree and having a mind-blowing conversation with a blind man. I love your stories, Gretchen. You have a rich talent. I'm so glad you're back to FanStory.
Jay
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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I hope other Fanstorians read this with their hands open. You add so much to this site, Gretchen. I just got used to your being 61 and working at a drug store and now I find you (Okay, Ryland) sitting beneath a Live Oak tree and having a mind-blowing conversation with a blind man. I love your stories, Gretchen. You have a rich talent. I'm so glad you're back to FanStory.
Jay
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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I might print this review off and frame it. I'm glad to be back. I think I got so wrapped up in standings and stars the last time and I was really getting into my artwork as well. I got so I wasn't enjoying it. I just have stories to tell, plain and simple. Thank you so much. You have no idea how much your review means to me. Gretchen
Comment from Mary Shifman
I enjoyed your story. It's a simple piece but it says a lot. The concept of gratitude is highly under rated and I'm glad you took the time to remind us of the value.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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I enjoyed your story. It's a simple piece but it says a lot. The concept of gratitude is highly under rated and I'm glad you took the time to remind us of the value.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for this. I truly appreciate it. Gretchen
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You are welcome.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Gretchen, you are wrong. This IS a fantastic story. I know because I am here in my car, between lessons, wiping away tears because of it...and that's why I had to bestow a sixth star. You are a very, very talented writer. You write clearly and simply and bestow emotions and thought. I love reading everything you write. Xo
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Gretchen, you are wrong. This IS a fantastic story. I know because I am here in my car, between lessons, wiping away tears because of it...and that's why I had to bestow a sixth star. You are a very, very talented writer. You write clearly and simply and bestow emotions and thought. I love reading everything you write. Xo
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much, Rachelle. I could not sleep last night because it started forming in my head. And as you know, once a thought starts to formulate, there is nothing that shuts it up. I really appreciate your great review and kind words. Gretchen
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It's truly my pleasure. I think you're immensely talented.
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Same thing goes to you. You have a fun and unique way of telling stories. The dress over the head while holding bagels still makes me crack up. Speaking of your writing ... when are you planning to post again? Gretchen
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I don't know. I'm feeling a little disgruntled and not exactly in the mood to share my work. I'm enjoying reviewing, though, so I'm choosing joy that way.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your story was awesome, Gretchen. It perfectly illustrated the
idea of gratitude. I loved reading it. The ending highlighted the
fact you realized you had much to be thankful for and understood
it was there all along. I loved the way you made the two sandwiches.
Your words were well thought out and contained an awesome
message. So many take so much for granted. Sometimes, we all
need an eye-opener to understand how blessed we are.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Your story was awesome, Gretchen. It perfectly illustrated the
idea of gratitude. I loved reading it. The ending highlighted the
fact you realized you had much to be thankful for and understood
it was there all along. I loved the way you made the two sandwiches.
Your words were well thought out and contained an awesome
message. So many take so much for granted. Sometimes, we all
need an eye-opener to understand how blessed we are.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for this nice review and comments. I am very appreciative. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Well I enjoyed it, it's amazing how stories come, but gratitude is realised when we finally realise that our lives are impregnated with things we take for granted, and this story accentuates that very thing Gretchen, well done, great story, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Well I enjoyed it, it's amazing how stories come, but gratitude is realised when we finally realise that our lives are impregnated with things we take for granted, and this story accentuates that very thing Gretchen, well done, great story, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much. Gretchen
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Welcome