Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Mrs. J"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from Sugarray77
Your humor is sterling!! I loved every bit of this raucously written tale and thought the woman was going to be gullible there for a minute. So well done and well written, Bill. Great job.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Your humor is sterling!! I loved every bit of this raucously written tale and thought the woman was going to be gullible there for a minute. So well done and well written, Bill. Great job.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Melissa. I've heard of this a lot.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Quirky and funny story. It is very well written, fast paced, with acute dialogue and an interesting and unexpected climax. Nicely done, Bill!!!
Mario
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Quirky and funny story. It is very well written, fast paced, with acute dialogue and an interesting and unexpected climax. Nicely done, Bill!!!
Mario
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Mario.
Comment from damommy
I've run into people like that. I walk away. Your story is amusing, especially with the name thing and the outrageous charges. Sadly, there are people just about that bad trying to sell something you don't need. Women run into that a lot.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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I've run into people like that. I walk away. Your story is amusing, especially with the name thing and the outrageous charges. Sadly, there are people just about that bad trying to sell something you don't need. Women run into that a lot.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Yvonne.
Comment from patricia dillon
Very well done! Mrs Johnson is a splendid example of a crooked opportunist. I liked the motto, "Never give a sucker an even break." That is her credo in life.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Very well done! Mrs Johnson is a splendid example of a crooked opportunist. I liked the motto, "Never give a sucker an even break." That is her credo in life.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Patricia
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You're welcome
Comment from irishauthorme
Neat twist! Interesting and funny dialogue exchange, "Mrs. Johnathon, Jackson, Jujubean," and those misnomers should have given me a clue to what was coming.
However, I did have an experience similar to your story. My wife took our Chevrolet pickup to the garage for a tire rotation and she called me and said that the mechanic called and had our pickup on the rack and the front shock absorbers were leaking and needed to be replaced. I called the guy and told him to leave the truck up, and I was on the way to look at the shocks. When I got there, the truck was parked outside, tires rotated, and the mechanic was not available. The owner said there was no charge. I gave a report to the BBB.
Good story.
irish
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Neat twist! Interesting and funny dialogue exchange, "Mrs. Johnathon, Jackson, Jujubean," and those misnomers should have given me a clue to what was coming.
However, I did have an experience similar to your story. My wife took our Chevrolet pickup to the garage for a tire rotation and she called me and said that the mechanic called and had our pickup on the rack and the front shock absorbers were leaking and needed to be replaced. I called the guy and told him to leave the truck up, and I was on the way to look at the shocks. When I got there, the truck was parked outside, tires rotated, and the mechanic was not available. The owner said there was no charge. I gave a report to the BBB.
Good story.
irish
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Love a happy ending.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. This piece is funny. It's good to beat them in their own game. Steal a car when he is talking to you about all the additional work you need for your Minivan (SUV). How can he check her credit if he didn't know her full name and can remember her last name? I think he was lying.
Well done.
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Yes. This piece is funny. It's good to beat them in their own game. Steal a car when he is talking to you about all the additional work you need for your Minivan (SUV). How can he check her credit if he didn't know her full name and can remember her last name? I think he was lying.
Well done.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Lisa
