Late For Dinner
Time to eat!2 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This has many good images making thereader picture the setting, plot and characters all a flurry. Then it slows down ro reveal this is a fantasy poem. "the troll dreams of his TASTY GOAT DATE!"
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This has many good images making thereader picture the setting, plot and characters all a flurry. Then it slows down ro reveal this is a fantasy poem. "the troll dreams of his TASTY GOAT DATE!"
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Yes, I wanted a good hook at the end. Thank you!
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***chuckle***
Comment from Dr. Von
Such beautiful writing for a simple poem. This piece is made rich by your rhyme scheme and your artistry. Your message is deliberate and fun. The word choices are solid. Good work.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Such beautiful writing for a simple poem. This piece is made rich by your rhyme scheme and your artistry. Your message is deliberate and fun. The word choices are solid. Good work.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you Sir! You are always so encouraging my friend. I wondered if I hadn?t used the word "so" too often but it just seemed to fit. Good times!
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Very welcome.
