Japanese Garden
A place to enjoy the peacefulness that nature can bring.3 total reviews
Comment from pookietoo
I wanted 3 -5 stanzas, stanzas are 4 lines..Will you please change this for this contest. Please and have a wonderful
day. Keep smiling. Enjoy little thngs
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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I wanted 3 -5 stanzas, stanzas are 4 lines..Will you please change this for this contest. Please and have a wonderful
day. Keep smiling. Enjoy little thngs
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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A stanza, is a division of a poem consisting of two or more lines arranged together as a unit. More specifically, a stanza usually is a group of lines arranged together in a recurring pattern of metrical lengths and a sequence of rhymes. Japanese Garden has four stanzas. As required. My understanding is that a stanza may consist of any number of lines.
Comment from RodG
This poem allows the reader to experience the peace and sensory pleasure of a Japanese garden. It was easy to follow in the footsteps of the from gingkoes to the pond. I especially like your closing line. Rod
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This poem allows the reader to experience the peace and sensory pleasure of a Japanese garden. It was easy to follow in the footsteps of the from gingkoes to the pond. I especially like your closing line. Rod
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the read and the review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Stonewall James
Unfurling flowers! Magnificent wording, so was the entire work. I was captivated by the imagery and those moment where intricate opposites to our senses did inhale the work, ( such as unsympathetic wrath so close to walk gently) a design that leaves so reader at rest such is philosophy where we are to remain upon our way, to yearn more for our fears, this work for me held me in such gracious pause, a delightful journey to reflect, to consider, to hope, I wondered of your other work? A treasure to read as this one. You have a delicate framework that can boldly capture our senses that tremble beyond truth. Thank you so dearly for this work, thoroughly enjoyed it. SJ
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Unfurling flowers! Magnificent wording, so was the entire work. I was captivated by the imagery and those moment where intricate opposites to our senses did inhale the work, ( such as unsympathetic wrath so close to walk gently) a design that leaves so reader at rest such is philosophy where we are to remain upon our way, to yearn more for our fears, this work for me held me in such gracious pause, a delightful journey to reflect, to consider, to hope, I wondered of your other work? A treasure to read as this one. You have a delicate framework that can boldly capture our senses that tremble beyond truth. Thank you so dearly for this work, thoroughly enjoyed it. SJ
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your careful read and encouraging review. Much appreciated.