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Comment from Wendy G
Very clever and humorous poem and the words were all incorporated smoothly. Rhyme and metre also flowed well. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Very clever and humorous poem and the words were all incorporated smoothly. Rhyme and metre also flowed well. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Awe, thank you so much Wendy. That means an awful lot to me and I appreciate your kind words. And I love how you always have something extra nice to say.. I am so touched by your kind words, my very dear friend!
Comment from Kaiku
Cute. Could easily turn this into a children's chapter in a book dedicated to fun animal adventures. I could picture each of the verses being illustrated to show each of this orangutan's adventures. It would be quite fun.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Cute. Could easily turn this into a children's chapter in a book dedicated to fun animal adventures. I could picture each of the verses being illustrated to show each of this orangutan's adventures. It would be quite fun.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Awe, thank you so much! That means an awful lot to me and I appreciate your kind words. I am so touched by your kind words, my very dear friend!
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Comment from Michaela Moore
First of all, brilliant work on being able to use the same rhyme throughout this most fun poem! I loved the rhyming words you used. And I also loved your cheeky tone with this little story. Orangutans are outrageous and cheeky, and so is your poem. Perfect match!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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First of all, brilliant work on being able to use the same rhyme throughout this most fun poem! I loved the rhyming words you used. And I also loved your cheeky tone with this little story. Orangutans are outrageous and cheeky, and so is your poem. Perfect match!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Awe, thank you so much Michaela. That means an awful lot to me and I appreciate your kind words. And I always love how you always have something extra nice to say.. I am so touched by your kind words, my very dear friend!
Comment from MissMerri
What a fun story! I liked it very much. The picture is so appealing, I had to read the poem that came with it. It seems you have followed the difficult instructions in the prompt, which couldn't have been easy. I wish you much luck in this contest. MM
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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What a fun story! I liked it very much. The picture is so appealing, I had to read the poem that came with it. It seems you have followed the difficult instructions in the prompt, which couldn't have been easy. I wish you much luck in this contest. MM
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Awe, thank you so much Adonna. That means an awful lot to me and I appreciate your kind words. And I love how you always have something extra nice to say.. I am so touched by your kind words, my very dear friend!
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! That's a fun story all told in monorhyme and I'm happy for the poor teased orangutan who was able to make his escape from the zoo and apparently knew how to drive as well as play instruments! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Lol! That's a fun story all told in monorhyme and I'm happy for the poor teased orangutan who was able to make his escape from the zoo and apparently knew how to drive as well as play instruments! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Awe, thank you so much Helen. That means an awful lot to me and I appreciate your kind words. And I always love how you always have something extra nice to say.. I am so touched by your kind words, my very dear friend!
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Creative entry! I'm sure it will do well!
Comment from Fleedleflump
More than achieving the form, which is entertainingly awkward, you've written a fun tale of wild fancy. I was cheering our red-headed hero on every step of the way :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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More than achieving the form, which is entertainingly awkward, you've written a fun tale of wild fancy. I was cheering our red-headed hero on every step of the way :-)
Mike
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Awe, thank you so much Mike. That means an awful lot to me and I appreciate your kind words. And I always love how you always have something extra nice to say.. I am so touched by your kind words, my very dear friend!
Comment from Thomas Blanks
You met the requirements of the contest, using all the words and rhyming all the lines. The story was a bit odd, but that's okay. It's hard to use those words in a normal story.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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You met the requirements of the contest, using all the words and rhyming all the lines. The story was a bit odd, but that's okay. It's hard to use those words in a normal story.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Lol, now Thomas, I would have thought that odd was right up your alley. Haha! And I don't do anything normal. If I can't shock or find humor, then I am not writing up to par. Thanks my friend for the kind review.
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One evil genius to another
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LOL
Comment from SLMorrical
What a cute poem. I can relate to this in many ways. It has an emotional and logical tone to it. This flows very well and I liked it very much. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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What a cute poem. I can relate to this in many ways. It has an emotional and logical tone to it. This flows very well and I liked it very much. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and kind words. It has had wonderful reviews, however few have explained it the way you did, emotional and logical. That was my thoughts when I wrote it and thank you for getting that. Like I wrote, we all need acceptance in life. Even an orangutan in a silly ole poem. Thanks again my friend.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, total rhyme is hard, one has to choose a rhyme that is common, and then choose rhymes that make sense, so it can be difficult, so well done, great theme, and skilful narrative, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Oh yes indeed, total rhyme is hard, one has to choose a rhyme that is common, and then choose rhymes that make sense, so it can be difficult, so well done, great theme, and skilful narrative, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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My dearest Roy, you are always one of my favorite reviewers, because if you like what you see, I hear such nice things from you, which I am always delighted to hear. And if you have some feedback for me, I am still delighted, because you do it in such a helpful and kind way, I am thankful for your reviews either way. So thank you for this lovely one that has made me smile and made my entire weekend. So appreciated, my awesome friend.
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Good job
Comment from Lilly Flowers
please excuse the typing, but i broke my arm and am typing with one finger
this was such a wondeful poem, with much meaning written in a subtle way
very entertaining and constructed perfectly
regards, lilly
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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please excuse the typing, but i broke my arm and am typing with one finger
this was such a wondeful poem, with much meaning written in a subtle way
very entertaining and constructed perfectly
regards, lilly
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Hi Lily, I have been meaning to get a hold of you, but didn't know if you were back yet or not. However since Helen emailed me to tell me about what happened I put you on my prayer list and have been praying for you daily.
Your typing was fine and I know how hard that is to do with one hand.
And you certainly gave me one very beautiful review with the kindest of words. Thank you for that and also for your very gracious gift of those shiny stars. I appreciate it all so much and my prayers will continue. You start feeling better and heal real fast, my lovely friend!
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you must be debby
i never know who i'm reviewing on the blind ones
thank you, sweet lady, for your kind words and prayers
