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Viewing comments for Chapter 71 "A sheer delight"Illustrated poems
6 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry read well, Jane. I enjoyed reading it.
Great job with the syllable count per line. I agreed with
your thoughts. Yes, the moon and stars (and nature) will calm a weary soul. Your words were descriptive with smooth flow.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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Your contest entry read well, Jane. I enjoyed reading it.
Great job with the syllable count per line. I agreed with
your thoughts. Yes, the moon and stars (and nature) will calm a weary soul. Your words were descriptive with smooth flow.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love it when the moon shines on the stars and with Jupiter being close to earth just now it has been a joy to watch the sky at night, a fine poem Jane, love Dolly x
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I love it when the moon shines on the stars and with Jupiter being close to earth just now it has been a joy to watch the sky at night, a fine poem Jane, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
Comment from Ricky1024
"a shear delight"
This is a 5-7-5 Poetry Contest Entry rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good morning and good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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"a shear delight"
This is a 5-7-5 Poetry Contest Entry rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good morning and good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
A blackened sky is more than enough for me to be soothed but add a dash of moonlight over a shiny sea while the breeze waffles through the trees would simply be divine.
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A blackened sky is more than enough for me to be soothed but add a dash of moonlight over a shiny sea while the breeze waffles through the trees would simply be divine.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
Comment from papa55mike
Especially since we are in the full moon cycle, this has a lovely old poetic style to it. What a wonderfully written piece.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Especially since we are in the full moon cycle, this has a lovely old poetic style to it. What a wonderfully written piece.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
Comment from Faith Williams
Moonbeams and starlight do indeed soothe weary souls and bring delight to all. Your poem made me smile. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
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Moonbeams and starlight do indeed soothe weary souls and bring delight to all. Your poem made me smile. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
