The Star in the Woods
A Madge story.17 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
What a lovely story! I enjoyed it a lot, especially the dénouement. Well done.
I picked up a few small things to edit - hope I'm not too picky.
Wendy
1. "into her Hazel eyes" - no capital needed.
2. "He never meant for that truck hit him": "to hit him"
3. ... "feel about your Mother...": No capital as it is not used here as a name or title.
4. Don't you worry, Lucy? Question mark not needed.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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What a lovely story! I enjoyed it a lot, especially the dénouement. Well done.
I picked up a few small things to edit - hope I'm not too picky.
Wendy
1. "into her Hazel eyes" - no capital needed.
2. "He never meant for that truck hit him": "to hit him"
3. ... "feel about your Mother...": No capital as it is not used here as a name or title.
4. Don't you worry, Lucy? Question mark not needed.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hi, Wendy. I just did another edit. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story. It's deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a great story, Mike. I found it to be interesting and engaging,always hoping for a happy ending for Lucy. I like the Madge image and hope there will be a Madge there for any young person who needs help in an ungiving world. Well done, Mike. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This is a great story, Mike. I found it to be interesting and engaging,always hoping for a happy ending for Lucy. I like the Madge image and hope there will be a Madge there for any young person who needs help in an ungiving world. Well done, Mike. Nancy:)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hi, Nancy. There are far too many Lucys wandering the streets today. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from GWHARGIS
Very cool. That story could have gone several ways. I kept waiting for it to go a little more spooky supernatural , but I loved the direction you chose. Favorite line was Madge saying "oh madly, child." I could see and hear her thick Southern accent. Great story. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Very cool. That story could have gone several ways. I kept waiting for it to go a little more spooky supernatural , but I loved the direction you chose. Favorite line was Madge saying "oh madly, child." I could see and hear her thick Southern accent. Great story. Gretchen
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hi, Gretchen. That is a good line. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from damommy
I love this story with the mysterious Madge. How wonderful she only shows up when she's needed. The world could use some Madges today. I'll check out the other story soon.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I love this story with the mysterious Madge. How wonderful she only shows up when she's needed. The world could use some Madges today. I'll check out the other story soon.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Teri7
Mike, This is a great story you have penned about Madge and the young lady she helped. It made me want a good hamburger too! lol You are a great storyteller (and writer). I look forward to reading more my friend. Blessings, teri
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Mike, This is a great story you have penned about Madge and the young lady she helped. It made me want a good hamburger too! lol You are a great storyteller (and writer). I look forward to reading more my friend. Blessings, teri
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hi, Teri. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from BethShelby
I really enjoyed the Madge story. It is supernatural in a good way. It reminds me of country song about a Truckdriver who helps people who break don't on the highway but he died in a wreck years before.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I really enjoyed the Madge story. It is supernatural in a good way. It reminds me of country song about a Truckdriver who helps people who break don't on the highway but he died in a wreck years before.
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
What a beautiful story Mike, these stories give hope to a lost world, and restore faith in truth, justice and love. The thought struck me, and this why I write, I think. But I also think that God guides my every step, and really, if I'm truthful, it's He that pilots the ship. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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What a beautiful story Mike, these stories give hope to a lost world, and restore faith in truth, justice and love. The thought struck me, and this why I write, I think. But I also think that God guides my every step, and really, if I'm truthful, it's He that pilots the ship. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Hi, Roy. Our God is awesome! Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Most welcome
