Jack and Bumkin's Play Date
As they baby talked cheek to cheek36 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
lol, that's a tightly clustered buttload of bumpuns you've squeezed out in front of us right here. It's certainly a different take on Halloween, too. Many thanks for the smile you inspired with this.
Mike
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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lol, that's a tightly clustered buttload of bumpuns you've squeezed out in front of us right here. It's certainly a different take on Halloween, too. Many thanks for the smile you inspired with this.
Mike
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I thank you so much Mike, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. That makes my whole day as it is so contagious.
Comment from Heather Knight
This is hilarious. The poem on its own is great, but the whole ensamble is even better.
Thanks for making me smile.
Good luck in the contest. You deserve it.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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This is hilarious. The poem on its own is great, but the whole ensamble is even better.
Thanks for making me smile.
Good luck in the contest. You deserve it.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I thank you so much Heather, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. You are a sweetheart! It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. That makes my whole day as it is so contagious.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
What a fun little 5 7 5. It was festive and seasonal. The picture was absolutely adorable. Great job and I'm glad I stopped by. Happy Halloween. Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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What a fun little 5 7 5. It was festive and seasonal. The picture was absolutely adorable. Great job and I'm glad I stopped by. Happy Halloween. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I thank you so much Gretchen, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. That makes my whole day as it is so contagious. And I always love when you stop by to see me! 😘
Comment from LJbutterfly
Haha! This poem for the contest is creative, humorous, and cute. Two nude babies who have cute names, and understand each others language. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Haha! This poem for the contest is creative, humorous, and cute. Two nude babies who have cute names, and understand each others language. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I thank you so much Lorraine, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. That makes my whole day as it is so contagious.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, they two are nothing but cute in their birthday suit
all 'dressed' up for Halloween, Mystery Author. You did a
great job with your word choices and the syllable count
per line. I like how you incorporated the season words into
their names. The formatting of your lines was clever. I liked
what you used for beautiful.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Haha, they two are nothing but cute in their birthday suit
all 'dressed' up for Halloween, Mystery Author. You did a
great job with your word choices and the syllable count
per line. I like how you incorporated the season words into
their names. The formatting of your lines was clever. I liked
what you used for beautiful.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I thank you so very much Jan! You are always so sweet and I do appreciate your lovely and fun comments. You made my day with your complimentary review and I love that it is making everyone smile or laugh 'witch' is contagious because I have one myself now. Thanks again my dear friend.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
The visual alone makes me smile. The large, easy to read text seals the deal. Cute nicknames embedded in a 5-7-5 text and the visual give you a funny and sweet Halloween entry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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The visual alone makes me smile. The large, easy to read text seals the deal. Cute nicknames embedded in a 5-7-5 text and the visual give you a funny and sweet Halloween entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Oh thank you so much Sandra, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. That makes my whole day as it is so contagious.
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You are welcome. It also shows you have succeeded with the prompt!
Comment from Brandon Clark
Very funny and creative! This is much befitting for the month and a humorous way to convey that. Good luck in the contest! Thank you for sharing, this made me laugh!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Very funny and creative! This is much befitting for the month and a humorous way to convey that. Good luck in the contest! Thank you for sharing, this made me laugh!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Oh thank you so much Brandon, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. That makes my whole day as it is so contagious.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is witty and sooo cute. I like the wording bumkin is the way a toddler would say pumpkin and the play on words with jack-o-lantern. This is a cute Halloween poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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This is witty and sooo cute. I like the wording bumkin is the way a toddler would say pumpkin and the play on words with jack-o-lantern. This is a cute Halloween poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Oh thank you so much Joan, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. That makes my whole day as it is so contagious.
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You're very welcome. Laughter is always a great gift.
Joan
Comment from Janet Foor
Delightful picture and a humorous 5/7/5 poem for the contest.
As they baby talked cheek to cheek - a great play on words to complete the message.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Delightful picture and a humorous 5/7/5 poem for the contest.
As they baby talked cheek to cheek - a great play on words to complete the message.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Oh thank you so much Janet, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. That makes my whole day as it is so contagious. Thanks again my dear friend.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Very funny picture, and you used it well with your words.
I got a chuckle out of both.
Good luck in the contest, and thank you for sharing.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Very funny picture, and you used it well with your words.
I got a chuckle out of both.
Good luck in the contest, and thank you for sharing.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Oh thank you so much Mary for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. That makes my whole day as it is so contagious.
