After Fluffy's Death
The Aftermath of Fluffy's Death16 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
Om my... Im not sure...is this black humor? You are Joking, right? Is this a humor category? Im not sure if you wanted it to be funny or not...wow is all i can say
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Om my... Im not sure...is this black humor? You are Joking, right? Is this a humor category? Im not sure if you wanted it to be funny or not...wow is all i can say
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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No black humor, but black horror growing up in my father's house. As the lyrics of the old spiritual is sung, "nobody knows the trouble I've seen, nobody knows but Jesus". Thanks for the review.
Comment from Michaela Moore
Tears silently coating each imprinted moment.
That line is unbelievably incredible. And then I also gapped at the brilliance of these lines...She ingested her pain.
She digested her sorrow.
Sandra, wow. And then the series of lines that grew SMASHED into climax. The genius of your poetic talent knows no bounds. Just when I think you have done the most incredible thing with words that could ever be done, you squeeze the life blood out of mere letters like no one ever has.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Tears silently coating each imprinted moment.
That line is unbelievably incredible. And then I also gapped at the brilliance of these lines...She ingested her pain.
She digested her sorrow.
Sandra, wow. And then the series of lines that grew SMASHED into climax. The genius of your poetic talent knows no bounds. Just when I think you have done the most incredible thing with words that could ever be done, you squeeze the life blood out of mere letters like no one ever has.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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MM, your review was so great that it came twice. lol Thank you for the exceptional rating. I am honored and humbled by your appreciation for my writing.
Comment from Michaela Moore
Tears silently coating each imprinted moment.
That line is unbelievably incredible. And then I also gapped at the brilliance of these lines...She ingested her pain.
She digested her sorrow.
Sandra, wow. And then the series of lines that grew SMASHED into climax. The genius of your poetic talent knows no bounds. Just when I think you have done the most incredible thing with words that could ever be done, you squeeze the life blood out of mere letters like no one ever has.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Tears silently coating each imprinted moment.
That line is unbelievably incredible. And then I also gapped at the brilliance of these lines...She ingested her pain.
She digested her sorrow.
Sandra, wow. And then the series of lines that grew SMASHED into climax. The genius of your poetic talent knows no bounds. Just when I think you have done the most incredible thing with words that could ever be done, you squeeze the life blood out of mere letters like no one ever has.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Sweet MM. Your review came twice.
Comment from Annmuma
What a chilling and sobering poem. It touches the soul. I have a friend whose father made him throw a bag of new born kittens into a creek to drown. My friend is 70 years old now and that day still haunts him. this poem has the feeling of truth. I hope it is not your truth. Bless you. ann
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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What a chilling and sobering poem. It touches the soul. I have a friend whose father made him throw a bag of new born kittens into a creek to drown. My friend is 70 years old now and that day still haunts him. this poem has the feeling of truth. I hope it is not your truth. Bless you. ann
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thanks for the review and comments. Fluffy was my kitten.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
As you know, I have privately read this poem before and it is powerful and awesome. Thank you for sharing this one on Fan Story. Can't wait for your schedule to slow down for our own project.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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As you know, I have privately read this poem before and it is powerful and awesome. Thank you for sharing this one on Fan Story. Can't wait for your schedule to slow down for our own project.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much Theo. You will probably like the long piece I am working on. It's the retelling of a story from a slave's perspective.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
So sad. What a cruel father. If you can kill a kitten like that you can hurt people too. You expressed the grief and depression so well. The presentation is beautiful too. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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So sad. What a cruel father. If you can kill a kitten like that you can hurt people too. You expressed the grief and depression so well. The presentation is beautiful too. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Ms. Gypsy. I appreciate your support of my in-your-face type of poetry,
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yeah, the big ol' bullies have to have someone to beat on, someone they can pummel and manipulate. You took me back to those vicious ass whuppin's of my childhood, until I figured out it was easier to give than receive. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Yeah, the big ol' bullies have to have someone to beat on, someone they can pummel and manipulate. You took me back to those vicious ass whuppin's of my childhood, until I figured out it was easier to give than receive. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks for stopping by and reading my writings.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Dang, Sandra, this is another powerful poem! You always tell a story and deliver a message clear and strong. I have never heard this anger expressed in this way and transferred to the child. Exceptional insight. Terry.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Dang, Sandra, this is another powerful poem! You always tell a story and deliver a message clear and strong. I have never heard this anger expressed in this way and transferred to the child. Exceptional insight. Terry.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Terry, for the exceptional review and your words of support. Both are appreciated.
Comment from Heather Knight
This is dauntingly beautiful and also incredibly painful. I don't know if I'll look at your portfolio because you've written so much the other day it took me ages to find the poem you wanted me to read.
Even if I don't look at your notes, I know these things unfortunately happen. I cannot understand such cruelty. It's really tough. I just hope you aren't the girl in the poem.
I don't know if you like non-fiction, but there's a book by Stephanie Foo, who tries to explain and understand why her parents were so cruel to her: What My Bones Know.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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This is dauntingly beautiful and also incredibly painful. I don't know if I'll look at your portfolio because you've written so much the other day it took me ages to find the poem you wanted me to read.
Even if I don't look at your notes, I know these things unfortunately happen. I cannot understand such cruelty. It's really tough. I just hope you aren't the girl in the poem.
I don't know if you like non-fiction, but there's a book by Stephanie Foo, who tries to explain and understand why her parents were so cruel to her: What My Bones Know.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the exceptional rating on this poem. I appreciate your comments and support of my poetry. Blessings to you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Animals know grief all too well as there is much cruelty in the world and I suspect this story is more about the cruelty of a man to his own child too, a powerful and hard hitting tale of immense brutality Sandra, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Animals know grief all too well as there is much cruelty in the world and I suspect this story is more about the cruelty of a man to his own child too, a powerful and hard hitting tale of immense brutality Sandra, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Dolly for your comments and review.
