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Comment from Aussie
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If you don't win this I'll eat my hat! Absolutely fabulous illustration of the owl! Your presentation is truly wonderful with that font. I liked your story/poem so much. Best wishes for the contest. K xx

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Well Aussie, I certainly don't want to see you eat your hat and if you could be any sweeter, I may have to eat mine. Because you are about as sweet as you can be my kind friend!'
reply by Aussie on 07-Oct-2022
    It is an Aussie saying. Perhaps you have heard of it?
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
    Oh yes! Lol, in
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
    I meant to add that at times will say, Ill eat my shorts
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
    My husband
Comment from lyenochka
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I see the style that Sally chooses with the flair for fancy fonts and creative pictures. I would think what would be even more perfect would be to add a song because she often chooses a song to go with her poem.
Best wishes in the contest!

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    Hi Helen, I tried so hard and the directions I had to add a song just wouldn't work for me. I even had a song called Night Owl picked out, so was disappointed when it didn't work. I'm going off an ipad so maybe what Jan gave me was for computers. However I am so happy that those large spaces are no longer an issue. Now I hope with my next poem, I remember how I did it.
    Thanks so much my lovely friend for your very kind comments.