Disappeared
2-4-2 poem7 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
It is good that these footprints aren't lost walking towards the seas. The words and artwork seems to impart the meaning that some of the things we do are erased and/or forgotten in the tides of life.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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It is good that these footprints aren't lost walking towards the seas. The words and artwork seems to impart the meaning that some of the things we do are erased and/or forgotten in the tides of life.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thank you Joan. That 3rd came as a surprise as I rarely place in the site sponsored contests.
Geoff
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You're welcome. It was well deserved.
Joan
Comment from Michaela Moore
Yes sir! All lives before, all lives after, will go into that vast beyond and after just a few years, truly be forgotten forever. Even though it will take longer, I believe that even those like Shakespeare and Mozart's footprints will be washed to nothing. Excellent words in so few syllables.
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Yes sir! All lives before, all lives after, will go into that vast beyond and after just a few years, truly be forgotten forever. Even though it will take longer, I believe that even those like Shakespeare and Mozart's footprints will be washed to nothing. Excellent words in so few syllables.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
Comment from Liz Westfall
2-4-2 poems are so difficult, but I think you nailed it. I love the picture you chose and the simple imagery your poem invokes. Good luck in the contest! - Liz
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2-4-2 poems are so difficult, but I think you nailed it. I love the picture you chose and the simple imagery your poem invokes. Good luck in the contest! - Liz
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry, read well, Wils.
Great job with the syllable count and
making a readable poem from 8 syllables.
The image was perfect. The last line seemed
to be a play on the word 'sea.'
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
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Your contest entry, read well, Wils.
Great job with the syllable count and
making a readable poem from 8 syllables.
The image was perfect. The last line seemed
to be a play on the word 'sea.'
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
Comment from royowen
They've always been quite popular that great poem "footprints" never knew who wrote it though, but we can be grateful that they did, all a little envious though. Beautifully written 2/4/2 poem my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
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They've always been quite popular that great poem "footprints" never knew who wrote it though, but we can be grateful that they did, all a little envious though. Beautifully written 2/4/2 poem my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed reading your 2-4-2 poem. It was a lovely thought and image of the footprints lost to sea. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I enjoyed reading your 2-4-2 poem. It was a lovely thought and image of the footprints lost to sea. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good 2-4-2 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very good 2-4-2 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022