Beneath an autumn Rain
Something Beautiful Started...7 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Lovely poem. It is smoothly written with fine metre and rhyme, and expresses well the change in emotions with the beginning of a new and unexpected relationship. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Lovely poem. It is smoothly written with fine metre and rhyme, and expresses well the change in emotions with the beginning of a new and unexpected relationship. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
-Excellent poem entry for Love Poem writing prompt contest.
-Nice presentation and gif picture... it's so cool.
-Your descriptive words flow well expressing a clear expression of romantic love. Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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-Excellent poem entry for Love Poem writing prompt contest.
-Nice presentation and gif picture... it's so cool.
-Your descriptive words flow well expressing a clear expression of romantic love. Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much for this encouraging review. :)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This was great. It reminded me of the way I felt with my husband on the day we started dating. You have told a story with many feelings. I love the picture of the couple under the umbrella as the rain falls around them. Not a care in the world for those two. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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This was great. It reminded me of the way I felt with my husband on the day we started dating. You have told a story with many feelings. I love the picture of the couple under the umbrella as the rain falls around them. Not a care in the world for those two. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you for this great review. What a nice memory to have of meeting your husband. Thanks again. :)
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What I liked about your love poem was the message and the honesty. I especially liked the second to last stanza but the entire poem was beautiful in appreciation of the relationship. Wonderful descriptions and word choices. A gem to read.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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What I liked about your love poem was the message and the honesty. I especially liked the second to last stanza but the entire poem was beautiful in appreciation of the relationship. Wonderful descriptions and word choices. A gem to read.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Sally Law
Loving this beauty, mystery poet. It looks like you're a shy one. A sweet poem of new love and in the rain! Just precious! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Loving this beauty, mystery poet. It looks like you're a shy one. A sweet poem of new love and in the rain! Just precious! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review, I appreciate it. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine love poem and if we can be touched by another and still feel free to express ourselves and be ourselves then we are truly loved by someone who is caring, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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A fine love poem and if we can be touched by another and still feel free to express ourselves and be ourselves then we are truly loved by someone who is caring, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review, I appreciate it. :)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
You did a great job of writing this poem without using the specified words. Kudos! By the second line, I was smiling, impressed with the images you were able to create.
I also appreciated your use of the literary technique of inversion (or anastrophe) to add variety and create more impact in your wording.
--> An angel you were, from what I could tell,
--> mesmerized I was by your tender smile,
Nicely done! Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
You did a great job of writing this poem without using the specified words. Kudos! By the second line, I was smiling, impressed with the images you were able to create.
I also appreciated your use of the literary technique of inversion (or anastrophe) to add variety and create more impact in your wording.
--> An angel you were, from what I could tell,
--> mesmerized I was by your tender smile,
Nicely done! Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thanks for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)
