Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry into the Love Poem contest excluding certain words. It's a poem that speaks of romantic love without any of the typical words. It covers a lot of ground. The text is easy to read. (Please tell me which font type this is. It is lovely) The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thank you so much! The text is called Sophia !

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 30-Sep-2022

You are welcome. I will be meeting Ms. Sophia for my next poem. lol Thanks!

reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Your welcome 🙂

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This is a good entry. But... it seems less personal, and has elements the seem preachy. This isn't speaking to a love or about a love; it is speaking of what this person thinks love should be.

notes:

It would be sad to go [to] bed without a warm embrace.

-missing word.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thank you

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was a beautiful poem about growing old together. Told in such a unique way. Sharing things that a couple does together. I'd suggest that you avoid cliches such as "snug as a bug in a rug" and try to phrase it in such a way that it is not familiar. Otherwise, fantastic!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thank you so much