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Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Terrific verse!
You have done a great job with prompt, very
creative!!
As one who is menopausal, this is hilarious as it
depicts all of the joy I feel most days;)
I appreciate the presentation. The illustration says
it all, and made me laugh out loud!!
The rhymes work well without force and create a
a tempo like a bounding rubber ball.
Thanks for sharing. Poking fun makes it a bit more
bearable.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Terrific verse!
You have done a great job with prompt, very
creative!!
As one who is menopausal, this is hilarious as it
depicts all of the joy I feel most days;)
I appreciate the presentation. The illustration says
it all, and made me laugh out loud!!
The rhymes work well without force and create a
a tempo like a bounding rubber ball.
Thanks for sharing. Poking fun makes it a bit more
bearable.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much Kitty, and as always you are so sweet! I am so happy to hear that I was able to make you laugh. I know how much laughter helps everyone. You have given me the biggest smile my dear friend! You take care Kitty!
Comment from jessizero
You did an excellent job writing this poem with the words provided! It got a laugh out of me. I'm not quite there yet, but my day is coming. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you (and your husband!).
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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You did an excellent job writing this poem with the words provided! It got a laugh out of me. I'm not quite there yet, but my day is coming. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you (and your husband!).
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Hahahaha! Thanks for the laugh you gave me at the end. I started laughing when I read it, and my husband says, 'what's so funny?' I just said, oh you wouldn't get it......Thanks Jessi for your great comments and now you have been forewarned! Lol
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A fun, tongue-in-cheek romp. The language is warm and witty. The flow is good. The rhymes are unforced. The poem stays on point. The comic fits and augments the poem.
Thanks for a good read.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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A fun, tongue-in-cheek romp. The language is warm and witty. The flow is good. The rhymes are unforced. The poem stays on point. The comic fits and augments the poem.
Thanks for a good read.
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Awe, I thank you my friend! Such kind words mean a lot and am always happy knowing I made someone laugh or smile. Thanks again!
