My Prayer
A dogs life is connected to many lives.18 total reviews
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This verse is well written and presented.
I am sorry your dog is not well, I send my prayers.
As a dog lover and owner, I understand your concern and fear of losing him/her.
My lab, Sienna is my support animal and I would be lost without her.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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This verse is well written and presented.
I am sorry your dog is not well, I send my prayers.
As a dog lover and owner, I understand your concern and fear of losing him/her.
My lab, Sienna is my support animal and I would be lost without her.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. Labrador, what a wonderful dog breed. I spent a lot of my early life with my labrador named Trixie. Dogs are so great and mine is seemingly getting better. Thanks for your thoughts. Take care.
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork,Barry.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You have used your 15 words well with a good topic.
-You wrote a good poem about your dog being sick,
and how that is difficult for you.
-I think God cares about people and creatures, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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-Very nice artwork,Barry.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You have used your 15 words well with a good topic.
-You wrote a good poem about your dog being sick,
and how that is difficult for you.
-I think God cares about people and creatures, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Yes you are right. God does care about animals as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. It tied for second in the contest.
Take care.
Barry Penfold.
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You are very welcome, Barry,and congratulations on the second place finish. I'm glad you did well.
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, this is so sweet, Barry. How we love our pets. I am a dog lover and the vet who'd put my dog down offered to drive me home I was crying so hard! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Aw, this is so sweet, Barry. How we love our pets. I am a dog lover and the vet who'd put my dog down offered to drive me home I was crying so hard! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Sally,
Thanks for once again reading and reviewing my poem. Yes, it is a very difficult time when your dog is not well. Lets see how it goes with mine. Oh, the poem tied second in the contest.
Take care and have a good day.
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I agree. Dogs are more than dogs. They are family.
I enjoyed your poem, Barry. The words told a great,
though poignant, story, the picture was precious, and
your message was clear. Yes, God's in control of all.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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I agree. Dogs are more than dogs. They are family.
I enjoyed your poem, Barry. The words told a great,
though poignant, story, the picture was precious, and
your message was clear. Yes, God's in control of all.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Jan for taking the time to read and reviewmy poem. It ran second (tied) in the contest. Dogs certainly are family. Mean a lot.
Take care and have a great day.
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Spitfire
This qualifies as heartbreaking. A dog's love is pure! The narrator wants God to heal him as a birthday present to him/her. The end rhyme of 'cure' and 'pure' puts this in the category of poetry. I love the art work you chose.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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This qualifies as heartbreaking. A dog's love is pure! The narrator wants God to heal him as a birthday present to him/her. The end rhyme of 'cure' and 'pure' puts this in the category of poetry. I love the art work you chose.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks for taking time to read and review my poem. Yes the art work if great. We are so lucky to have FanArt to draw from when illustrating stories and poems. The poem ran second in the contest.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love the selflessness of this. Praying for the dog to heal. Not to win the lottery or meet some perfect soul mate. No, having the dog whole and healthy is winning the lottery. Great job on this.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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I love the selflessness of this. Praying for the dog to heal. Not to win the lottery or meet some perfect soul mate. No, having the dog whole and healthy is winning the lottery. Great job on this.
Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Gretchen,
Thanks for taking time to read and review my poem. Having a healthy dog is like winning the lottery. Take care and have a great day.
Barry Penfold.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are sad, descriptive and creative. Thank you for
the author's notes - I believe God can help! As I read the author's words
I thought about how a dog becomes such a part of of our lives. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Happy Belated Birthday!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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The author's words are sad, descriptive and creative. Thank you for
the author's notes - I believe God can help! As I read the author's words
I thought about how a dog becomes such a part of of our lives. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Happy Belated Birthday!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the belated Birthday wishes and I can say my dog has improved. Lets hope all will be ok. Thanks for taking time to read and review my contest entry. It tied for second. Take care and have a good day.
Comment from jaded831
Animals are a loving member of the household. Unfortunately we can't hold on forever. It's painful, my prayers are with you. I hope everything turns out well. I have gone through what you're going through many times. God bless.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Animals are a loving member of the household. Unfortunately we can't hold on forever. It's painful, my prayers are with you. I hope everything turns out well. I have gone through what you're going through many times. God bless.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my contest entry. Good news is that my dog is improving. The poem ran in second in the contest so all is looking brighter. You have a great day and take care.
Barry Penfold.
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Glad to hear it.
Comment from royowen
Im not sure this is true, but of course if it is then God can certainly grant this wish. I can remember when I thought that I shouldn't bother God with trivia, but God like a dad said He was always interested in our business. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Im not sure this is true, but of course if it is then God can certainly grant this wish. I can remember when I thought that I shouldn't bother God with trivia, but God like a dad said He was always interested in our business. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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True it is except for it not being my birthday. Dogs are such good companions and it is tough when they are not well. But things are looking a bit brighter. God does have a special power.
Take care and hope family are well.
Cheers
Barry Penfold
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That?s great Barry
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Been there recently, done that. It ended that its time was at hand, and who am to argue with the Supreme. no more aches or pains for the little fellow. he is missed but I believe his spirit has visited me.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Been there recently, done that. It ended that its time was at hand, and who am to argue with the Supreme. no more aches or pains for the little fellow. he is missed but I believe his spirit has visited me.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Tom, thanks for taking the time to read and review my contest entry. Yes dogs certainly are great companions. But he has not gone yet so lets hope tomorrow brings some more improvement.
Take care
Barry
