Look and Listen
We live in a beautiful world4 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a pretty good job for a 1-2-3-4 poem, Pookie. It is difficult to get a message across with so few words, but you have managed very nicely.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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This is a pretty good job for a 1-2-3-4 poem, Pookie. It is difficult to get a message across with so few words, but you have managed very nicely.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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One vote.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you have received your first vote.
Your 6 word poem say volumes.
There is much to cherish , wondrous fauna and flora
yet many don't take the time to appreciate these gifts God created for us.
There are people that pass their weekends going to discotheques full of blasting noise.
Fools .
hearing birds sing, watching the sun retreat are far more rewarding.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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Ciao poet, you have received your first vote.
Your 6 word poem say volumes.
There is much to cherish , wondrous fauna and flora
yet many don't take the time to appreciate these gifts God created for us.
There are people that pass their weekends going to discotheques full of blasting noise.
Fools .
hearing birds sing, watching the sun retreat are far more rewarding.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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Thanks!
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You didn't say if you helped me in the faith contest.
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I could use your help in the reactions contest.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a nicely worded 1-2-3-4 poem. It is clearly stated. The text is large and easy to see. The visual is okay. Would be good to see something depicting beauty other than just color. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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This is a nicely worded 1-2-3-4 poem. It is clearly stated. The text is large and easy to see. The visual is okay. Would be good to see something depicting beauty other than just color. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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I wish it would do well in the contest.
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Don't forget to vote for yourself. LOL You are welcome. Good luck!
Comment from jessizero
I keep counting that last line as five syllables. I could be wrong, though. I enjoyed your poem as it is. It was peaceful and uplifting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I keep counting that last line as five syllables. I could be wrong, though. I enjoyed your poem as it is. It was peaceful and uplifting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022