Comment from GARY MACLEAN

Excellent

That is my mantra. I am ready but I am not ready ... yet! Death can whisper all it wants, I ain't goin' till I know it is time. I will never give up.

I like the obstinance of the verse.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022

Thanks for your kind words and for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.

Comment from Dr. Von

Excellent

This is a great use of a 1, 2, 3, 4 poem scheme. You used effective words to deliver a strong and sweet message. The artwork supports the poem in a powerful style. Thank you for your expressive poem.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022

Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.

reply by Dr. Von on 15-Sep-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a beautiful poem in very few syllables. You did the count correctly, and the subject was sad and lovely. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.