Unique Beauty
Waves break and foam on the shore8 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 1-2-3-4 Poem writing prompt Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I love the imagery and presentation too. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Wonderful entry for the 1-2-3-4 Poem writing prompt Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I love the imagery and presentation too. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-2-3-4 poem, Unique Beauty, has the proper formatting and looks to the sea for evidence that the joys of living roll in as a tide which washes away missteps from before. Nice.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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This 1-2-3-4 poem, Unique Beauty, has the proper formatting and looks to the sea for evidence that the joys of living roll in as a tide which washes away missteps from before. Nice.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
Just the miracles of water and air creates the question how we in general don't see God's handiwork. ....................................................................................
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Just the miracles of water and air creates the question how we in general don't see God's handiwork. ....................................................................................
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
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Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Precisely timed, perfectly proportioned, wonderfully beautiful, no mistakes or accidents. They just keep rolling in as God intended. Do we need any more proof?
Very nice.
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Precisely timed, perfectly proportioned, wonderfully beautiful, no mistakes or accidents. They just keep rolling in as God intended. Do we need any more proof?
Very nice.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned and illustrated poem in this rare, short form. I love your theme and presentation. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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Beautifully penned and illustrated poem in this rare, short form. I love your theme and presentation. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
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Thank you sally
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully stated and presented poem. The message is straightforward, but the last line makes this a complete poetic thought. The font size is large and easily read. The dark blue background with white text is a class act presentation. Keep that presentation style. The presentation draws readers to your poem. The words make them stay. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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This is a beautifully stated and presented poem. The message is straightforward, but the last line makes this a complete poetic thought. The font size is large and easily read. The dark blue background with white text is a class act presentation. Keep that presentation style. The presentation draws readers to your poem. The words make them stay. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much
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You are welcome.
Comment from Carol Clark2
The lovely picture of the waves reminds me of their loud crashing sounds and the beauty of their power, especially that of an undertow. They seem to reflect the power of the Creator. Good 1-2-3-4 poem. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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The lovely picture of the waves reminds me of their loud crashing sounds and the beauty of their power, especially that of an undertow. They seem to reflect the power of the Creator. Good 1-2-3-4 poem. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Very good nature imagery, and a good
concluding line.
-You also create a peaceful mood.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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-Nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Very good nature imagery, and a good
concluding line.
-You also create a peaceful mood.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thankyou
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You are welcome.