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Butterfly Kiss

A very light kiss

3 total reviews 
Comment from Teri7
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I wish I had six stars to give you for this very cute 1-2-3-4 poem you have penned about the butterfly kiss. You used very good words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. teri

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022

Comment from jessizero
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This poem was light and airy, and gave off a fragile feeling. You did a great job with the syllable count, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2022

Comment from RodG
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A great photo chosen to inspire your poem. But sadly, you have not the required number of lines or syllables. Please reread the directions. When you have revised, I'll reread your entry.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
    Rod,

    Thanks for your review and the heads up. I've revised the poem to match the required syllables and lines.

    All the best,

    Eugene
reply by RodG on 13-Sep-2022
    Much better, Eugene. I revised my rating and added two stars.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
    Thanks