My Husband's Need
And my attempts to avoid giving in41 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I really thought this was going all the way, if you know what I mean. Well, it did. All the way to the chocolate dipped gourmet ice cream bars from Costco. A true addiction. I cast no stones....
Sending you my best today for this delightful post. (Sorry to have missed this, by the way.)
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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I really thought this was going all the way, if you know what I mean. Well, it did. All the way to the chocolate dipped gourmet ice cream bars from Costco. A true addiction. I cast no stones....
Sending you my best today for this delightful post. (Sorry to have missed this, by the way.)
Sal XOs
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Nice puns my dear sister. You are on the ball today. Thank you so much for this fun review and comments. You are so sweet and I am surprised that you think I was actually talking about what it sounded like. Actually I shouldn't be because you know that I am a bit of a rebel . I like to shock people a little, but maybe not that much. Haha! Thanks again my beautiful friend!
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You are most welcome! If I ever lose my sense of humor, which I inherited from my sweet mother, go ahead and call the preacher. I'm ready for the glorious hereafter! Actually, I am looking very much looking forward to the Lord's coming. I believe by the looks of things, it is not far away. Some days, okay, every day, I long for my new immortal body. You and me, we'll dance the cha-cha and sing and dance, worshippers for eternity! XOs
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Sense of humor is what gets us thru this life. That is why I made my latest a little comical. I don't want people that I am moping and asking for pity. That is the last thing that I would want either. That is way too heavy and I can't carry that yucky burden of knowing that I am pitied. I hope I never come across like that. Between you and I, it is someone to relate to and be there for. I am so very thankful for you.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Debi, thought you were being nasty. I was wrong and very amused when I reached the bottom of your poem. I was going to recommend you re-post in the naughty area. You pulled me in, good job, my good friend. Willie
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Debi, thought you were being nasty. I was wrong and very amused when I reached the bottom of your poem. I was going to recommend you re-post in the naughty area. You pulled me in, good job, my good friend. Willie
Comment Written 17-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
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Lol, Willie, aren't I a bad girl? I was in a silly mood the night I wrote that and wanted to make sure every example could be used for both. It did feel good to have a little fun with everyone tho. My favorite poems to write are the fun ones with a little surprise at the end. So I thank you my sweet friend for having a little fun w me on that, for your awesome comments and your very generous six stars!!! You are such a great friend Willie!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I scream, you scream, we all scream for ice cream, but is that where you wanted to go when you began. I wrote a similar piece but where it be is among 2500 pieces. I am too lazy to chase it down. Congrats. And once more I get one vote. How are you feeling?
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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I scream, you scream, we all scream for ice cream, but is that where you wanted to go when you began. I wrote a similar piece but where it be is among 2500 pieces. I am too lazy to chase it down. Congrats. And once more I get one vote. How are you feeling?
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Lol, yes I knew that was the ending., Tom. After all he is 70 years old and can't chase as fast as he once could. Lol, maybe that's why he wants ice cream instead. Thanks my great friend for the fun review and comments.
I sure needed a little help from my friend, as the song goes. On my way for part 2 of surgery to walk again. You brightened my morning, my dear friend.
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I am glad to abide in your presence. Think of smiling. God speed your recovery.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this made me smile and somehow I don't think ice-cream will cool this desire! Being sexually compatible in a marriage takes some patience, I loved your poem, very clever and inventive with great rhymes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Ha ha ha, this made me smile and somehow I don't think ice-cream will cool this desire! Being sexually compatible in a marriage takes some patience, I loved your poem, very clever and inventive with great rhymes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much Dolly, for your lovely review and such kind words for my poem. I had so much fun writing it and your comments made it even more fun for me.
Thanks again my friend!
Comment from Michaela Moore
The last line is great! Ice Cream! HA! How many times in life, husbands always seem to get their way about everything. And I feel the angst you portray in your poem. It is much easier to just give in, but at the same time, can't I ever win?
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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The last line is great! Ice Cream! HA! How many times in life, husbands always seem to get their way about everything. And I feel the angst you portray in your poem. It is much easier to just give in, but at the same time, can't I ever win?
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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I hope you had as much fun reading as I did writing it. It is a little out of the ordinary for me, but I was scolding him one day for not following doctors orders and suddenly it sounded like my excuses of years ago Thus, a poem is written. Haha! Thanks my friend for the fun review and kind words.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Omg!! I was totally in the gutter with that one. It was funny when I was thinking about sex but then it was hysterical when you said ice cream. We all have our priorities. Lol. This was a very clever and funny poem.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Omg!! I was totally in the gutter with that one. It was funny when I was thinking about sex but then it was hysterical when you said ice cream. We all have our priorities. Lol. This was a very clever and funny poem.
Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Gretchen, thank you so much for your lovely review and such kind words for my poem. I had so much fun writing it and your comments made it even more fun for me. Thanks again my friend!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was such a fun poem, of course we all knew it was the ice cream! Not a one of us thought it could possibly be anything else!! Lol. Your rhyming was as smooth as silk, it was so enjoyable to read and it had a fabulous fun ending. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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That was such a fun poem, of course we all knew it was the ice cream! Not a one of us thought it could possibly be anything else!! Lol. Your rhyming was as smooth as silk, it was so enjoyable to read and it had a fabulous fun ending. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Sandra, thank you so much for your lovely review and such kind words for my poem. I had so much fun writing it and your comments made it even more fun for me. Thanks again my friend!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
You're crazy, you little devil. Give him some REAL ice cream all ready. I know exactly how he feels. I ask constantly for a HOT DOG, and I get similar responses. You're just a little tease, or are you?
Great rhyming, as usual a very nice bounce and rhythm to it, with a really neat surprise at the end. You had us all going for a while there young lady.
Very fun read, good job.
Gary M
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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You're crazy, you little devil. Give him some REAL ice cream all ready. I know exactly how he feels. I ask constantly for a HOT DOG, and I get similar responses. You're just a little tease, or are you?
Great rhyming, as usual a very nice bounce and rhythm to it, with a really neat surprise at the end. You had us all going for a while there young lady.
Very fun read, good job.
Gary M
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Lol, thanks Gary! Maybe a little provocative in the suggestive nature, but sure was fun, knowing that it wasn't that after all. Thanks for playing along with me at my silly little riddle, but silly is fun and would much rather do fun that sad. I think you may be surprised when you find out who I am as this was kind of over the limit for even me. Thanks for the fun and awesome review my friend. You made my weekend with your delightful comments.
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Oh, I know who you are. There is no mistaking the style. You are my ... I'm not telling.
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Hahaha!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a witty poem seems to be about a husband's need for sex that far exceeds his wife's. She is right that he show learn self control and caring about his wife's feeling on the subject. I like the twist at the end that it is ice cream.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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This is a witty poem seems to be about a husband's need for sex that far exceeds his wife's. She is right that he show learn self control and caring about his wife's feeling on the subject. I like the twist at the end that it is ice cream.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Joan, thank you so much for your lovely review and such kind words for my poem. I had so much fun writing it and your comments made it even more fun for me. Thanks again my friend!
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My pleasure.
Joan
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Nicely written poem about a widespread problem that many couples face as they get older. You conveyed the meaning without getting too graphic. I like the snarky humor, particularly the last line.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Nicely written poem about a widespread problem that many couples face as they get older. You conveyed the meaning without getting too graphic. I like the snarky humor, particularly the last line.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Jake, thank you so much for your lovely review and such kind words for my poem. I had so much fun writing it and your comments made it even more fun for me. Thanks again my friend!
