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Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Regina Elliott
Humorous 20 syllable poem
that has a serious side to it,
( in my opinion ). My daughter
has her little family to take
care of, I live with them, and
I'm 65. So she is sandwiched, but I do my best to help her
and my son-in-law. My
grandchildren can be a
handful, but they're good kids
Anyway, best wishes and
blessings to you. ~
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
Thanks, Regina, for the review. Any suggestions for improvement? I do wish my parents wanted to move in with me.
Comment from
John Ciarmello
This was an enjoyable piece. I do appreciate the artwork as well. It is all very well put together with a bit of humor as well. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
Thanks, John, for the review. Any suggestions for improvement?
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