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More Wonderful FS Friends

Who Feel Like A Second Family

40 total reviews 
Comment from Michael Cassar
Exceptional
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I debated regarding the exceptionL ratings. I don't recognize the orchid collector. Thanks for your appreciation and help to better my image. I followed your advice in my last posting

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
    Hi Michael, for the life of me I don't know how I thought that you were a collector of orchids, but please forgive me for that error. I guess what l admired most about you were your high standards and convictions of writing about what you believe in, as I do it sometimes myself w humor or else serious poetry. So please know that I will be editing that to make it completely about what it is I love most about you. If you ever have the chance again, it should be done in a half hour or so. Thanks so much for the six stars and hope after editing, it will be a little more worthy. Sorry and as a friend, I picked you because I am a fan of you and your writing.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Exceptional
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Hi Debi! Fabulous poem here,
thank you so much! I was also curious about who your
other FS friends are, and they're good souls. Very kind
and thoughtful of you to
include me. Have a restful
Labor Day. Many blessings to you.~

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
    Regina, I was kind of upset w myself for not getting you in the first one. One thing that I always depend on is the smile you give me, as I do appreciate having a friend like you that has so many of the same views. I certainly didn't expect a six star review, but it sure means a lot to me. Thank you my very dear friend.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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I hope your Fan Story friend is recovering from these wonderful remarks in your poem. A wonderful tribute to them and for us to read. There are so many fans on here that it is difficult to know every one of them.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
    Thanks Rosemary. The contest is over now and all of the names have been listed by each if you would like to click on the title and it will take you there. I am sure you will find some people that you know or recognize. Thanks again my friend.
Comment from robyn corum
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Debi,

Another lovin' spoonful of members to celebrate and enjoy! It's amazing that there really are so many here to love! I know when I start making these lists I always get frustrated because the lists run long and I worry about leaving folks out!! But what a great problem, right?? hahaha

Nice job! Can't wait to see the answers!

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
    Thanks Robyn, as this has been so much fun. And I fear I will not quit until I tell everyone of my dear friends what they have meant to me. My list was made up a while back, but I keep finding more that I accidentally left out and try to write the few lines as I go. They are so random so like you said, you'd hate to leave any out. This is so not about the contest part as I think that everyone is a winner, as well as the recipients and even the reviewers as they try to guess. Thank you so much my friend, as your kind comments are so appreciated.
Comment from nomi338
Exceptional
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Thank God I was still able to award this outstanding poem six stars. Debi, you are a rare gem. One of the best things about you is I don't have to dig inside a mine or pan for gold dust. You are a treasure, in your friendship I do trust. God blessed all who call and consider you friend. We are in the presence of a special friend who is not afraid to allow her feelings to be expressed. You are fearless, loyal, loving, and I pray my friend forever.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
    Nomi, I just love you! Could you be any sweeter? I can't thank you enough for the awesome review, comments and the gift of six stars. Actually it's truly your review that is worth the six stars. You have no idea how much I appreciated all the kind things you said!
    Thank you again my Forever Special Friend.
    (also I should have your interview ready by end of the weekend)
    I am so excited.
reply by nomi338 on 01-Sep-2022
    I am glad that you are excited, I on the other hand am filled with terror. What I I disclose too much or not enough? I volunteered so I will soldier on and give it my all. :))
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
    I have never done this before, so I too am kinda nervous. You can rephrase or change any of my questions.
    I just finished answering questions from Gary M, who asked to interview me.
reply by nomi338 on 01-Sep-2022
    Oh I do so want to read that interview. Tell me, were there any naughty bits? to excite and intrigue the casual reader?
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
    Haha! Actually it's pretty boring!
reply by nomi338 on 01-Sep-2022
    Nah,. Really????
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
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It is fun to read through your poetic list of FanStory friends and try to guess who they might be. Mainly I'm mystified. I'm looking forward to finding out who this one is: "This guy can be a tough reviewer, known for fours or less, But when he gives a five or six, you know you've done your best." I would like to be his fan and maybe get some of his tough reviews in order to improve my writing. Stanza two interests me as well. I had knee replacement surgery 8 days ago and today is my first day back on my computer! It is an ordeal, but everyone who's had the same says it's worthwhile.
Though interesting, I offer this poem a 4 because it doesn't have much imagery or other poetic elements. But I find it fine for what it is. This line is perhaps my least favorite: "She's been writing since her age of color crayons and pencils" as it seems awkward and I'm not sure what it means exactly. Would this possibly work better? "She's been writing since she first took colored crayons in her hand."

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 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
    Katie, since these poems have a little different kind of meaning to them, we all have different ways of getting our hint across. I tried to follow the best of what I know to be true of certain people. They are meant to give just enough tease, but I understand where you are coming from. That line you thought to help me with might be a better hint and I will look at it. Lol, I know you have crossed paths with the four or less guy, but I do have to say he has been much more generous with me lately and on the day I received my six from him, there was much rejoicing here. : ). It is no secret that it's Jesse getting a new knee tomorrow. He hasn't walked in a while, but I have been trying to be a support for him and will post a little poem to let everyone know how he is doing. I am so happy for you that you had yours done. I had one included in my reconstructed leg on July 7th and due to the ongoing attack of my Lupus I was no longer walking. I had many complications and almost didn't make it, but eight days later came home to in-home therapy and home health care. Someone here every day until this last Friday and they will be back after my next leg on Sept 12th. Katie I am actually walking a little with my walker now and I am on cloud 9. I wish you much progress with your new knee as mine is still pretty painful, but I chose to do this w/o narcotics.
    I wish you all the best my friend and I thank you for the kind review and comments.
Comment from MissMerri
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You have given such good clues! I think I can guess several of them, but I admire your skill at putting all this into amazing lines of melody and rhyme. Very well done, and I look forward to seeing who's who. ;p MM

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
    Thanks so much Merri. I wrote my list long ago of my dearest friends here but I fear two contests just couldn't cover all the people I have grown to love here. Every time I think of someone new they get added to end of my list and have even written about each one already. But the order that their in doesn't matter for the most part, so I guess there will have to be a part three and maybe four. I so appreciate your very kind comments my friend!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
    I almost forgot that I also wanted to congratulate you on having the number one ranked poem for the month of August. It is a very big honor and you and your poem were so deserving
Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi Debi,
I find these contests a real hoot. You read and straight away your mind clicks to a certain writer on site. I believe you left some magic bread crumbs for us all to nibble on.

A well rhymed and constructed poem Debi. I enjoyed the read and the hints... can't wait for the big reveal.

All the very best in this contest.

With our thoughts we create...
a perfect match.

Kind regards,
James.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
    Oh James, what a very sweet review and comments. Thank you for the very kind words. These contests have been fun and so far have been about the people that I knew the most and have connected with on mostly a weekly basis. However I get to know more, like you, it will make it hard to ever stop. And I am not sure I want to. : ). Thank you again my friend!
Comment from Wendy G
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Another great set of rhyming stanzas, tributes for many FS writers. I have about half down on my list at present, but there are very few that I am sure of, perhaps only four or five! Looking forward to the next big reveal.
Wendy

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
    Thanks Wendy and I am excited as a child on Christmas morning.
    I just enjoy telling people who are important to me, how I feel so yes this is so much fun. Thanks for being one of my dear friends!
    Thanks also for such kind words!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Well, Sweet Lady, you are on a roll--make mine a cinnamon roll.
You did a great job with your many tributes to your FS friends,
Debi. I enjoyed reading your well-thought-out succinct words. I
believe I know 4 or 5, but not enough to pass the test. So, I'll
wait for the big reveal and think some more before then.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
    You too Jan, as I believe we are all winners including recipients and the readers of our poems. I think yours was so awesome and I so much appreciated you joining in this time. I will wait a few more weeks and do it again, after I see how my next surgery goes. Thanks so much for such kind words and being such a great friend!