Land of magic
There were flying unicorns all around me5 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This will sound strange, but I did not know that my mother loved unicorns until she passed away. It must have been something she acquired over the years after I married. Which I married at 16. Anyway, I like the picture. Except for the wings and horn.
For some reason, it gives me the creeps. And I am not downgrading anyone who loves them. It is just me. It is funny how some things freak me out. I like owls that are alive, not stuffed or porcelain. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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This will sound strange, but I did not know that my mother loved unicorns until she passed away. It must have been something she acquired over the years after I married. Which I married at 16. Anyway, I like the picture. Except for the wings and horn.
For some reason, it gives me the creeps. And I am not downgrading anyone who loves them. It is just me. It is funny how some things freak me out. I like owls that are alive, not stuffed or porcelain. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your review 🙂
Comment from Fleedleflump
You use the required words well, as the poem flowed beautifully and they never felt out of place. I think this sounds like an awesome dream and I hope I have a similar one soon!
Mike
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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You use the required words well, as the poem flowed beautifully and they never felt out of place. I think this sounds like an awesome dream and I hope I have a similar one soon!
Mike
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Rhodesia
This is a delightful fantasy poem. I particularly like the silver glitter of the horns of unicorns, and having them as friends. The imagery of flying unicorns all around is really magical.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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This is a delightful fantasy poem. I particularly like the silver glitter of the horns of unicorns, and having them as friends. The imagery of flying unicorns all around is really magical.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from RodG
This poem should appeal to all readers, especially those who have fantasized about unicorns.
You have used the required words well.
Easy to visualize the Speaker riding around on the unicorns as if she were on a merry-go-round in the sky.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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This poem should appeal to all readers, especially those who have fantasized about unicorns.
You have used the required words well.
Easy to visualize the Speaker riding around on the unicorns as if she were on a merry-go-round in the sky.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Hello, this is an adorable poem, but it's almost impossible to read. You have white text on light grey background. You might need to change that for the contest.
Take care,
Erika
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Hello, this is an adorable poem, but it's almost impossible to read. You have white text on light grey background. You might need to change that for the contest.
Take care,
Erika
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Thank you
