Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Poet.
I enjoyed reading it. Great job with the rules.
Your picture choice is perfect for your words.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you make a question at the end.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022

Thank you!

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Aug-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

This was an interesting choice of words. I took it as you should write a story that will one day shine bright. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022

Thank you!