Sunset Kiss
Nature 5-7-517 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines with great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the vote of confidence!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I like this poem very much. you nailed the format. I like the interplay between the words. The last line is particularly effective. I like the phrase "love's high tide"
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I like this poem very much. you nailed the format. I like the interplay between the words. The last line is particularly effective. I like the phrase "love's high tide"
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thanks for the vote of confidence!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I love the play on words using nature and romance intermittently. The sea kisses the shore and it rolls on through the high tide.
Very nice feel to it. Also, love the artwork that shows the sunset coming down over a small oceanside community.
Thank you for sharing your talent for the less than obvious.
Jesse
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I love the play on words using nature and romance intermittently. The sea kisses the shore and it rolls on through the high tide.
Very nice feel to it. Also, love the artwork that shows the sunset coming down over a small oceanside community.
Thank you for sharing your talent for the less than obvious.
Jesse
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the vote of confidence!
Comment from Eternal Muse
That is a beautiful poem, and I love nautical themes. Great imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
The only thing, your text font was jarring to my eyes. I think, a darker test font will stand out more will improve the presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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That is a beautiful poem, and I love nautical themes. Great imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
The only thing, your text font was jarring to my eyes. I think, a darker test font will stand out more will improve the presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the tip!
Comment from June Sargent
In three short lines, you have painted an atmosphere of romance and intrigue. The kiss, the waves and rolling tide are perfect elements of a love story - Hallmark or Lifetime movie night! Should do well in the contest.
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In three short lines, you have painted an atmosphere of romance and intrigue. The kiss, the waves and rolling tide are perfect elements of a love story - Hallmark or Lifetime movie night! Should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
puts the poem all together! I pondered on the scene of these words
and focused on the last line which I loved! The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
puts the poem all together! I pondered on the scene of these words
and focused on the last line which I loved! The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Sally Law
This is exceptional, mystery poet. Very impacting and gave me pause to reflect. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
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This is exceptional, mystery poet. Very impacting and gave me pause to reflect. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Sunset Kiss, has the right setup and gives life to the close of day as the sea and the sky remember to not go to bed angry. Nice.
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This 5-7-5, Sunset Kiss, has the right setup and gives life to the close of day as the sea and the sky remember to not go to bed angry. Nice.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you. Love this thought.
Comment from jaded831
Your poem has a romantic feel, creates a beautiful picture in the readers mind, and is accompanied by a wonderful picture. Together you created a wonderful presentation. Good luck in the contest.
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Your poem has a romantic feel, creates a beautiful picture in the readers mind, and is accompanied by a wonderful picture. Together you created a wonderful presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully worded and presented 5-7-5. The syllable count is on point. It's easy to read because your font is a good size. The visual fits well. This is just a well-done entry. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a beautifully worded and presented 5-7-5. The syllable count is on point. It's easy to read because your font is a good size. The visual fits well. This is just a well-done entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
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You are welcome.
