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Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Keeping Track of Star Trek II: "
a collection of phenomenally mundane work.

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Comment from judiverse
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Where would all that knowledge of every Star Trek series get you? The rejoinder, "Get a life" comes to mind. Don't fret if you don't have every fact about every series at hand. As far as I'm concerned, the original is the only one worth mentioning. I met William Shatner in Texas many years ago. He was signing autographs for some reason or other. judi

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Judi, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a semblance of Star Wars.

The work highlights a recapitulation of the protagonist's acquired experience of the plots, characters, setting and techniques employed in the production Star Wars as illuminated to his or her understanding by fanstory and his or her Son-in-law.

The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with Star Trek cum Star Wars.

Excellent work. Bravo.

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Lloyd
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 26-Jul-2022
    Remain Blessed.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Well, I hope whoever that was, shared information that was worth knowing. I will have to check out the responses. Maybe you should have just written about your favorite episodes. Mine in the TNG was "Shaka When the Walls Fell" but I'm sure that wasn't the title. Lol.

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
    I remember that episode with Paul Winfield as the alien who tried to communicate English phrases that made no sense to anyone.