To Binge or Not to Binge
Just one more episode5 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the four line Poem writing prompt contest. Good line count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Excellent entry for the four line Poem writing prompt contest. Good line count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
We have, by and large, entered into the twilight zone, if and when we turn the teevee on. It's called an idiot box for a reason I suppose therefore I propose we choose our programming carefully.
We have, by and large, entered into the twilight zone, if and when we turn the teevee on. It's called an idiot box for a reason I suppose therefore I propose we choose our programming carefully.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 4-lined poem on watching TV. It seems to meet all the requirements. Like the visual it could fit food or overwatching TV. For this word remove the "e"~Twingeing.
Good luck in the contest.
This is a good 4-lined poem on watching TV. It seems to meet all the requirements. Like the visual it could fit food or overwatching TV. For this word remove the "e"~Twingeing.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
Comment from Regina Elliott
Witty contest entry about
binge watching. We need
more humor these days. My
best wishes for the contest.
This poem is a good contender. Sunday blessings.
Witty contest entry about
binge watching. We need
more humor these days. My
best wishes for the contest.
This poem is a good contender. Sunday blessings.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
Comment from rspoet
This could be an excellent entry for the contest,
but line one has eight syllables.
Weary teary eyes barely blink
Suggest;
Weary eyes just barely blink
Excellent rhymes.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
This could be an excellent entry for the contest,
but line one has eight syllables.
Weary teary eyes barely blink
Suggest;
Weary eyes just barely blink
Excellent rhymes.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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rspoet,
Thank you for your 5 star review. Your comments are duly appreciated. I noted the error and revised the poem accordingly.
Eugene