Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

I truly enjoyed the imagery in these words. The imagination thrives and inspires us.
There is beauty in these words.
Best wishes in the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022

thanks as usual

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2022

thanks as usual

Comment from Ramona Agin

Excellent

What is this purple crystalline sky I wonder that sits in thee catacombs of your mind? A mystery. Very good for early poetry flows well. Good imagery

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022

thanks appreciate it

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

This feels like a description of inspiration, and how we feel entire scenes and sensations bubbling up within us, seeking to be realised through our words. It's got a beauty all it's own. I really enjoyed this :-)

Mike

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2022

thanks one of my oldest poems written in 1975?

reply by Fleedleflump on 14-Jul-2022

I would probably have been a twinkle in my Dad's eye around then :-)