Blessed Brother/ Part 6
An unexpected turn21 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Another wonderful chapter in this story, John. I'm glad the Father managed to make Owen mad enough to show Everett the truth of what he intended.
You need to go and edit this, John, it been doubled up so it's on here twice, and the spacing is all out in the last few lines. Other than that, well done, Now I can't wait for part 7! :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Another wonderful chapter in this story, John. I'm glad the Father managed to make Owen mad enough to show Everett the truth of what he intended.
You need to go and edit this, John, it been doubled up so it's on here twice, and the spacing is all out in the last few lines. Other than that, well done, Now I can't wait for part 7! :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Sandra. It's taking me a bit to get used to this computer, lol. I will go back in. Thank you for the great review, my friend.
