Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Mud Pie"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Bill,
Your words and photo make me think of how I used to feel about poetry. (Maybe this is not your intention here).
I like the mixture of poetic forms, and as an optimist, I think maybe a great cake will turn out after being heated.
Good luck with this one, Bill.
Blessings,
Cindy
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Bill,
Your words and photo make me think of how I used to feel about poetry. (Maybe this is not your intention here).
I like the mixture of poetic forms, and as an optimist, I think maybe a great cake will turn out after being heated.
Good luck with this one, Bill.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Cindy
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Comment from lyenochka
Sounds like you were playing with your grandchildren and this poem was inspired. I'm glad that you can pat these poetic forms together from the "wet dirt bakery!"
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Sounds like you were playing with your grandchildren and this poem was inspired. I'm glad that you can pat these poetic forms together from the "wet dirt bakery!"
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Helen. The kids were here for two days while our daughter preps for a family cruise.
