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Random Rhyme and Petty Prose

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a collection of phenomenally mundane work.

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Comment from Sugarray77
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Hahaha...this is such a fun one, Bill. You always do a stellar job with adding delicious humor to your work. I must give you kudos for the colored font. The red really helps! So fun. Thanks.

Melissa

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
    Thanks, Melissa
Comment from prettybluebirds
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This is an interesting poem. I don't know how you poets keep track of all these different styles of poetry. It doesn't matter to me as I'm not a poet anyway. If they sound good I like them, but some not so well. Nice work.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
    Poets are rare, then there are the rest.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill, this certainly sounded like a rant to me written in the acrostic form. I'm impressed indeed. I liked it and I'm amazed what you manage to say within this poetic form. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
    Thanks, Yvonne. It is supposed to set the tone for the following ad hoc collection of poems and micro fiction.
reply by Ulla on 25-Jun-2022
    Well, I'm Ulla, actually. lol.
Comment from BethShelby
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This must have taken some serious thought. I enjoyed reading this. LIkely you are correct that this Acrostic will rule them all. Anything further would definitely lead to loss of sleep.

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
    Thanks, Beth. It is supposed to set the tone for the following ad hoc collection of poems and micro fiction.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! Well, I won't try to find motives as I don't want to lose sleep. Enjoyed your occasional rhymes like "over-rated" and "syncopated" and created new words like "knowetry." Sounds like a fun new book!!

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
    Thanks, Helen. It is supposed to set the tone for the following ad hoc collection of poems and micro fiction.
reply by lyenochka on 25-Jun-2022
    Glad you're starting a new book, Bill!