Moonlight Magic
A Duodecatain24 total reviews
Comment from Tina Crute
Amazing and vivid and musical, this is! How do you do this, lol? The lily pads like music notes...aah, love it. I love all of this. It's a great composition and I'm glad you won:)
Tina
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Amazing and vivid and musical, this is! How do you do this, lol? The lily pads like music notes...aah, love it. I love all of this. It's a great composition and I'm glad you won:)
Tina
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your support very much.
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You are welcome! Anytime!
Tina
Comment from judiverse
This flows so beautifully it gets the reader caught up in the fairies dancing on this magical evening. The rhyme is excellent, too. You really give a lovely picture of the evening, with the lily pads and water hyacinths. Great description of the fairies dancing. Wonderful work. judi
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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This flows so beautifully it gets the reader caught up in the fairies dancing on this magical evening. The rhyme is excellent, too. You really give a lovely picture of the evening, with the lily pads and water hyacinths. Great description of the fairies dancing. Wonderful work. judi
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you for such a lovely review.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You have described the Nocturnal Magic of the nighttime beautifully in this one Yvonne. I always love a little fairy magic to read and you didn't disappoint in your Duodecatain form. cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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You have described the Nocturnal Magic of the nighttime beautifully in this one Yvonne. I always love a little fairy magic to read and you didn't disappoint in your Duodecatain form. cheers,
valda
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Oh, I'm glad, Valda. Thank you so much. You always make me feel good.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. A beautiful overall presentation background and font. Very nicely done. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Love it.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. A beautiful overall presentation background and font. Very nicely done. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Love it.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review!
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a beautiful poem. I do think you have made the fairies come to life. Who would have thought that darkness could bring to life such beauty and sounds to soothe the soul? Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This is a beautiful poem. I do think you have made the fairies come to life. Who would have thought that darkness could bring to life such beauty and sounds to soothe the soul? Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you. I'm glad you could see that.
Comment from evilynne
Your poem is so very magical, indeed. I can just see the fairies dancing! Your work is very well written. The author's note is helpful in regard to the format. Evi
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Your poem is so very magical, indeed. I can just see the fairies dancing! Your work is very well written. The author's note is helpful in regard to the format. Evi
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you for such a lovely review . . . and stars!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Magical, mystical, moonlight marvels! You did an awesome
job with your beautiful club response, Yvonne. The image is
beautiful with equally beautiful words to pair with it. I loved
reading your whimsical poem. Awesome job with the complex
style required. Your rhymes are extraordinary, the flow is super,
and the imagery created is magnificent. You are an awesome
nature poet and an excellent poet in many genres.
Thanks for sharing a super example of this style, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Magical, mystical, moonlight marvels! You did an awesome
job with your beautiful club response, Yvonne. The image is
beautiful with equally beautiful words to pair with it. I loved
reading your whimsical poem. Awesome job with the complex
style required. Your rhymes are extraordinary, the flow is super,
and the imagery created is magnificent. You are an awesome
nature poet and an excellent poet in many genres.
Thanks for sharing a super example of this style, Jan
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Awww, you're making me blush. Thank you for those lovely comments and the stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever write, perfectly formed and metered and I loved the sentiment here, a delightful read and I loved this form and must give it a try one day, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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A clever write, perfectly formed and metered and I loved the sentiment here, a delightful read and I loved this form and must give it a try one day, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Yes, you must try it. It's fun to do. Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from lyenochka
You have convinced me that you have seen these fairies dance! And there is something mystical and magical about the moonlight on water. I liked how you used this complex form to depict the sparkle and the music!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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You have convinced me that you have seen these fairies dance! And there is something mystical and magical about the moonlight on water. I liked how you used this complex form to depict the sparkle and the music!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much! I do tend to write a lot about fairies. All in my imagination, I'm afraid, but I will keep a look out for the wee folk.
Comment from Wendy G
Congratulations on such a beautiful poem, with mastery of so many requirements! Quite an achievement! Sorry I don't have any sixes left. I enjoyed this lyrical piece.
Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Congratulations on such a beautiful poem, with mastery of so many requirements! Quite an achievement! Sorry I don't have any sixes left. I enjoyed this lyrical piece.
Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Wendy. I love your review, and no six is needed. Never worry about that!