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Horror Novels

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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We must be kindred spirits. I love horror movies and Stephen King is my favorite writer. I, also, have read all his novels. He is a good role model to follow for inspiration. I also love the The Twilight Saga.

Excellent entry for the My Muse writing prompt contest.

Great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear vision..

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -- Atticus

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2022


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Comment from jaded831
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Mysteries and poetry inspire me, along with nature and people. No matter what works inspiration gets us going. Your poem inspired me to look into other genres, I'm to set in my ways, perhaps horror would add new flavor to my writing. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2022


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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry was interesting and told readers much
about you and your desire to be a horror/fantasy writer. I
enjoyed reading your work, Mystery Author. You gave readers
good details on your passion.
May I suggest ~ I know your work, your choice.

Reading lots of
fantasy and horror novels
inspired me to be[ become ] a writer,
those books are my muse,
I keep writing each day. [ I write every day. ]

It makes my adrenaline [ It fires up my adrenaline ]
to write better, [ and helps me write better. ]
I create my own stories
and characters,
fiction books give my writing life.

When I first read
The Twilight Saga by
Stephanie Meyer, it
inspired me and became
my muse to become a
horror and fantasy novelist.

I have always dreamed [Since childhood, I dreamed ]
since a child of writing like [ of writing like Stephen King, ]
Stephen King,
horror and fantasy are my passion, [My passion is horror and fantasy. ]
I read the majority of his novels,
his books made me [His books inspired me ]
write horror stories. [ to write horror stories. ]

I am a prolific writer,
I never give up,
I am hooked writing literature, delete literature ]
my muse makes me [ my muse encourages me ]
(to) keep on going,
I have a passion for writing. [delete you've already said this ]
The novel, Carrie by Stephen King
was the reason [I decided to set my goal ]to pursue myself
to being a horror novelist. [ as a horror novelist.]
Best wishes, Jan







 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
    Thank you! I have changed it. Is it better now? Please check.
reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 09-Jun-2022
    Yes. I would make the font a size larger and a darker blue. Also, you don't pursue yourself.

    decided to set my goals to pursue myself
    as a horror novelist.

    I suggest
    . . . set my goals and work toward becoming a horro novelist.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
    Okay! Does it look better now?
reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 10-Jun-2022
    the blue font is too neon--try purple
    the size is much better
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
    Okay! How does it look?
reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 10-Jun-2022
    Great! 😊
Comment from C.A.Currie
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I think Carrie is the only King novel I have yet to read! And for some reason, I have no desire to do so. BUT, King is one of my favorite writers of all times. He can make me stay up ALL night reading - even when I have to be bright-eyed and bushy-tailed first thing in the morning! You have chosen a very strong writer to take your inspiration from - good choice!
I do think you might want to consider re-reading before posting. here are some of the places I found that needed some polishing

It makes my adrenaline
to write better,

I am hooked writing literature (maybe add 'on' to 'writing literature')

was the reason to pursue myself
to being a horror novelist.

My suggestion: Take time to check your writing - I know what you are saying in your head, you just need to take the time to make sure that what you want to say is what you are actually writing/putting on the page.
You have a strong voice and you know how to draw a picture with words (one of the hardest things a real writer has to accomplish - and you show potential for being a natural at this) so keep on writing - just slow down and double-check your grammar.
I hope this helps you to become the writer that we both know you can become! Wanting for you; much success!

Thanks for sharing!
Hugs and Sunshine from my heart to yours
~ Christine ~

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


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Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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Horror is one of my top chosen venues as well. I would rather read or watch a spectacularly bloody and gory horror novel than I would a real-life murder drama. For the most part I know the horror story is fiction, but the real-life drama is, well, real life. And that is too real.

Good story

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


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Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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Those stories written by Stephen King are hard to beat. I wish you the best in your writing. It sounds like you have done much reading. Hopefully one day we will see you have written a best seller. It would be great. It sounds like you are on the right path. Keep it up. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
    Thank you! I do want to write a Bestseller. I will.
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 09-Jun-2022
    I believe you. I look forward to your Bestseller. You are welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Raul,
This free verse lets us know what your inspirations are to write novels. But, what is your inspiration for writing poetry. I enjoy fantasy books too. But horror, not so much. I have never been into blood and guts.
The first line of the second stanaza doesn't seem to fit the second.
Maybe 'It gives me the zeal'.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
    Thank you!
reply by dragonpoet on 09-Jun-2022
    No problem.
    Joan
Comment from Whitewave
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It is great to know that you have found your passion and are able to employ and feed it in writing horror stories. I think it is a special kind of writing and takes a special gift to make it good. I can feel your passion in your poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2022


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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Steven King has written some scary stories that have been made into films. I am not a fan of horror but I can see how it has inspired you to write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
    Thank you so much! God bless you!🙏
Comment from kahpot
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Yes our muse no matter its source can keeps our mind churning with ideas and give us creativity, I like these horror stories as well, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
    Thank you!