You Got to Know When to Fold'em
Shouldn't have played the extra ace21 total reviews
Comment from Lilly Flowers
Well, I don't know anything about card playing, but I'm familiar with the song. Now I'll probably be humming it the rest of the day, LOL. This was a fun-to-read poem. I loved the image you chose to go with it. Regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Well, I don't know anything about card playing, but I'm familiar with the song. Now I'll probably be humming it the rest of the day, LOL. This was a fun-to-read poem. I loved the image you chose to go with it. Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 24-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you Lily. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this post very much. You were very creative with the prompt. This is well written, composed and presented. The rhymes work well here without feeling forced. Well done and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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I enjoyed this post very much. You were very creative with the prompt. This is well written, composed and presented. The rhymes work well here without feeling forced. Well done and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you, it was a fun write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading and honestly feel guilty for smiling as I read. It makes one wonder about Lady Luck.
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading and honestly feel guilty for smiling as I read. It makes one wonder about Lady Luck.
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I know nothing about gambling with cards and it seems you are well versed on the subject. I know that we have to know when to quit as timing is everything, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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I know nothing about gambling with cards and it seems you are well versed on the subject. I know that we have to know when to quit as timing is everything, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you Dolly. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Earl, it's so good to hear from you again.
I like this poem--some of it quite a shock, yet it's witty and straightforward.
Excellent entry.
Good luck with all your writing,
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Earl, it's so good to hear from you again.
I like this poem--some of it quite a shock, yet it's witty and straightforward.
Excellent entry.
Good luck with all your writing,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you Cindy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Your welcome, Earl. Congratulations on your winning poem!
Cindy
Comment from Beri Bee
Lucky Ed! He got this great epitaph! I keep trying to imagine playing a fifth ace! I've heard of a four-flusher (is that the right expression?). This should go on a tombstone somewhere outside of Tombstone! Thanks!
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Lucky Ed! He got this great epitaph! I keep trying to imagine playing a fifth ace! I've heard of a four-flusher (is that the right expression?). This should go on a tombstone somewhere outside of Tombstone! Thanks!
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Yes indeed! I still have your Smuckatelly poem on my bookshelf from 2019!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, descriptive, made me smile, and
are creative. Thank you for the author's notes - they compliment
this poem. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is great
and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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The author's words are interesting, descriptive, made me smile, and
are creative. Thank you for the author's notes - they compliment
this poem. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is great
and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the Another Witty Epitath writing contest, Earl. I really loved the picture, anytime it involves gambling usually means trouble with a capital T. Especially with an extra Ace. Great job, very well done, immensely enjoyed.
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Good luck wishes regarding the Another Witty Epitath writing contest, Earl. I really loved the picture, anytime it involves gambling usually means trouble with a capital T. Especially with an extra Ace. Great job, very well done, immensely enjoyed.
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Most welcome, Earl.
Comment from Bill Schott
This witty epitaph, You Got to Know When to Fold'em, covers the bets for Ed who laid down a fifth ace in a place where that is a disgrace, so you get shot in the face.
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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This witty epitaph, You Got to Know When to Fold'em, covers the bets for Ed who laid down a fifth ace in a place where that is a disgrace, so you get shot in the face.
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you Bill. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from karenina
Ooops. Yup. If you're gonna cheat, cheat "real!"
Poor old not so Lucky" Ed!
Well...at least now he's keeping the worms fed!
I got a good chuckle out of this!
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Ooops. Yup. If you're gonna cheat, cheat "real!"
Poor old not so Lucky" Ed!
Well...at least now he's keeping the worms fed!
I got a good chuckle out of this!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you Karenina. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.