Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Joan, this is so cute and meaningful and a perfect entry for this prompt. The use of self reflection is good and really enhances this verse. I wish you luck!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 21-May-2022

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reply by the author on 22-May-2022

Thanks for the kind review and the good luck wishes, Melissa.
Joan

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry read well, DP. I like the shortness of it
and the message. The rhymes work, too. Maybe add 's'
to poem. Your message is clear to readers.
Best wishes, Jan

 Comment Written 21-May-2022

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reply by the author on 21-May-2022

Thanks, Jan. I will add the s.
Joan

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I can relate to this. You really have a gift for evoking emotion in the reader. This is clever, as well. Thank you for sharing this epitaph here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-May-2022

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reply by the author on 21-May-2022

Thanks for reading and reviewing and the best wishes. Glad you could relate to it.
Joan