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Sleep Pamela Sleep

She dominated every moment of my life.

3 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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Harry,
This seems to state that he believes his wife went to heaven and that also she talked to much while alive.
Good luck with the probmpt.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 22-May-2022


reply by the author on 22-May-2022
    And bossed him around. Thanks for read and feedback.
reply by dragonpoet on 22-May-2022
    Any time, Harry.
    Joan
Comment from jessizero
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This was clever and funny! I enjoyed your witty epitaph post immensely. It could easily be true, yet probably unsaid. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-May-2022


reply by the author on 21-May-2022
    Thank you for your read and comments. Appreciated.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I'm happy this is fiction. You did a good job with the
prompt. Your words are smooth, the rhymes work,
the image is supporting, and your message is clear.
Best wishes, Jan

 Comment Written 21-May-2022


reply by the author on 21-May-2022
    Thank you for your read and comments. Appreciated.