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Say My Name

Wonderful Word to Live By

17 total reviews 
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello,

OMG ....this is the funniest thing I read in fanstory in a very long time. My favorite...

" In case of a Zombie Apocalypse you don't have to. be able to run fast, just faster than who you are with." LoL

--An awesome entry for the Notes to the Grandchildren contest. You give very good advice with a great sense of humor. I think you have my vote.

--the story flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear picture.

Well done! I wish you the best.

Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus


 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 27-May-2022
    Thank you very much for the six beautiful stars Gypsey Blue Rose. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from royowen
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Just love this, I don't see were anyone could possibly disagree with any of these principals, mind you I don't think one could read them in any official books on wisdom, they're probably parodies out of Murphy book of wisdom, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thank you Roy It was a fun write. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from tfawcus
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You've reminded me of quite a few saying here that I'd forgotten. As is always the case with grandchildren, wisdom needs to be well-seasoned with humour!

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This piece, Say My Name, has a lot of old saws throughout, but the most profound statement, to me, is when you truly die the last time someone speaks your name. Thought-provoking.

 Comment Written 23-May-2022


reply by the author on 23-May-2022
    Thanks Bill.
Comment from lyenochka
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An entertaining post. I like your list of sayings. My favorite was "The person who says they can, and the person who says they can't are both right." Good title which becomes clear at the end. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 22-May-2022


reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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I love it. I will use this list, I may even add a couple, but I will use it on all my children and grand children. These are things, that may sound humorous, but are, in reality, true. I especially liked "Teamwork is essential..." and "Getting old..."

Thanks for a very "useful" article.

 Comment Written 22-May-2022


reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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I enjoyed this poem very much!! The whimsical tone is refreshing, as I read a lot of heavy subjects on this site. You did a terrific job with the prompt, very creative. I can tell you had fun. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-May-2022


reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is fun, the first three thanks to Jim Croce, but otherwise wisdom from lots of sources. All of them are good advice that, hopefully, your grandchildren will take. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-May-2022


reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a great list you have compiled. I think the advice I like best is don't volunteer, and continue to talk about the dead. With those two you won't go far wrong.

 Comment Written 21-May-2022


reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from joann r romei
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This was interesting, it did make me smile and reflect, I actually agree with some of the sayings mentioned, lol Good luck in the contest, no errors noted in the work.

 Comment Written 21-May-2022


reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.