Mom, I Miss You So
When Mom passes from this world, your heart dies daily.3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-7, Mom, I Miss You So, has the proper formatting and expounds on that time when we first have to negotiate living and dealing with life without a mom. A hollow sense along with denial and anger likely appear.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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This 5-7-7, Mom, I Miss You So, has the proper formatting and expounds on that time when we first have to negotiate living and dealing with life without a mom. A hollow sense along with denial and anger likely appear.
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thank you for your generous stars and for reviewing my poetry.
Comment from jessizero
This was a great three line poem. I cannot imagine losing my mother. I am so sorry that you lost yours. It did inspire a beautiful poem, though. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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This was a great three line poem. I cannot imagine losing my mother. I am so sorry that you lost yours. It did inspire a beautiful poem, though. Best wishes.
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thank you for generous stars and for reviewing my poem.
Comment from Pantygynt
Sounds like a good idea but first you have to get those on hundred and fifty characters into some semblance of order - and you ain't there yet though your reasons for wanting extra time are most laudable
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Sounds like a good idea but first you have to get those on hundred and fifty characters into some semblance of order - and you ain't there yet though your reasons for wanting extra time are most laudable
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thank you for your generous stars and for kindly reviewing my work.
