Ted's Own Dilemma
80 Word Story contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent story for the eighty word contest.
Most people really don't want an extensive answer
when they ask how one is doing.
Your story hits the nail on the head. :)
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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This is an excellent story for the eighty word contest.
Most people really don't want an extensive answer
when they ask how one is doing.
Your story hits the nail on the head. :)
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Robert. Yeah, some folks just don't care. Being slightly sociable is about the extent of their generosity. Lol.
I really appreciate the stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great rest of your day.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this is fine. Mostly dialogue tale. The ending is what most would think, maybe not say. Now, the story itself may pull too much on the reader's need to suspend disbelief.
I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Hmm, this is fine. Mostly dialogue tale. The ending is what most would think, maybe not say. Now, the story itself may pull too much on the reader's need to suspend disbelief.
I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Yes, I'm sure some care about this much. Lol. Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Lancellot.