Comment from Ja Majal

Excellent

Love!!! As an ardent lover of nature I appreciate your poem,
Covering all
Four seasons too.
I'm a little sad it had to be kept so short! But that's precisely why it's so good!! Thank you !!

 Comment Written 14-May-2022

Comment from GARY MACLEAN

Excellent

The most beautiful song is from Mother Nature. I like it. Perfect satisfaction of the line and syllable count and the don't rhyme consideration, yet you tell an comforting story. Nicely done. Thank you.

 Comment Written 13-May-2022

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reply by the author on 14-May-2022

Thank you so much. So glad you like it.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I enjoyed reading how you expressed the ways Mother Nature communicates with us - here is is by visual means with displays of seasonal beauty. She speaks by sounds as well - maybe that could be another poem for you to write? rushing water, whispering breeze etc.

 Comment Written 03-May-2022

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reply by the author on 07-May-2022

Thanks, LisaMay. Glad you liked it. Your suggestion is an excellent idea. I?ll try it out.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Cinquain Tanka contest. Good syllables count The connection between lines can be improved. I like the simple presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest!

gypsy

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 03-May-2022

Thanks?Glad you like it.

Comment from Carolyn Dooley

Excellent

Yes and they still hold up. It looks like something you could put on a Christmas tree. I really like the picture. The glistening. Thank you for sharing this poem.

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 03-May-2022

Thanks, Carolyn. I was excited when I saw the picture. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

reply by Carolyn Dooley on 03-May-2022

Yes. You are welcome.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes It's interesting to reflect upon the many and varied faces of Mother Nature and how we experience it - encapsulated effectively here in this short format

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 03-May-2022

Thanks for your nice review?I love the different aspects of Mother Nature.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

So true and we have the pleasure of enjoying all the joys of nature you speak of here and appreciating its fine display, much enjoyed, l good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 03-May-2022

Thanks for your lovely review, Dolly. I?m fascinated by the seasons of nature.

Comment from Haylee Hemphill

Excellent

Hello!

You are exactly right! This is how Mother Nature speaks and she is absolutely beautiful. I hope you continue to share your work with our community and others.

One Love
Haylee

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 03-May-2022

Thanks, Haylee. Glad you liked the poem.