Dam
a 5-7-58 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery is great.
I love the idea of beavers floating along the creek :)
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Excellent entry for the Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery is great.
I love the idea of beavers floating along the creek :)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That's so cute! I have seen those beaver dams and those guys are some hardworking architects/construction workers. But they don't like being watched and will slap their tails at you if you do!
Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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That's so cute! I have seen those beaver dams and those guys are some hardworking architects/construction workers. But they don't like being watched and will slap their tails at you if you do!
Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you,Helen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm not quite sure what sort of creature built this home but it certainly is inventive as nature survives against the odds, your few words said it all here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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I'm not quite sure what sort of creature built this home but it certainly is inventive as nature survives against the odds, your few words said it all here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Beavers.
Comment from Val Crisson
I love this entry! It's unique and quite interesting. You create a vision of a beaver family without saying a word. The presentation is great, Very good entry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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I love this entry! It's unique and quite interesting. You create a vision of a beaver family without saying a word. The presentation is great, Very good entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Val
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
They are so smart. Beavers like to make homes on such piles of logs. They have homes that float with the waves. They actually have it made. They can travel as they rest. I like the picture. And enjoyed reading. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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They are so smart. Beavers like to make homes on such piles of logs. They have homes that float with the waves. They actually have it made. They can travel as they rest. I like the picture. And enjoyed reading. Have a great day.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Carolyn
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You are welcome.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your 5/7/5 poem which is in excellent form.
Lovely imagery and nice use of alliteration in line three.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your 5/7/5 poem which is in excellent form.
Lovely imagery and nice use of alliteration in line three.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Debra
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with very good description of the beaver's home.
We have some in our area. they are interesting,
but also take down many trees.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
robert
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with very good description of the beaver's home.
We have some in our area. they are interesting,
but also take down many trees.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
robert
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Robert
Comment from royowen
What a great entry in this contest my friend. Aren't these builders that build in watery places incredibly engineers, God equipped them very well indeed, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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What a great entry in this contest my friend. Aren't these builders that build in watery places incredibly engineers, God equipped them very well indeed, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Roy.
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Most welcome