Morning Dance Recital
God showing me another beautiful morning from my patio41 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I love the amalogy, and likewise the idea of the early morning must as being like a skirting tutu, what a great idea my friend, God s dressing up creation indeed, beautifully written good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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I love the amalogy, and likewise the idea of the early morning must as being like a skirting tutu, what a great idea my friend, God s dressing up creation indeed, beautifully written good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you Roy, your kind review and lovely comments. They are so very much appreciated!
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Most welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This nature 5-7-5, A Morning Dance Recital, has the right setup and gives the misty morning a spin with an idea of the pirouetting cloud formations entertaining us.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This nature 5-7-5, A Morning Dance Recital, has the right setup and gives the misty morning a spin with an idea of the pirouetting cloud formations entertaining us.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Bill, thank you so much for your kind review and lovely comments.
It's so very much appreciated! Thanks again
Comment from June Sargent
This poem speaks with childlike wonder about the glory and beauty of a sunrise. The imagery of a ballet is perfect. Lovely picture to highlight your thoughts. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This poem speaks with childlike wonder about the glory and beauty of a sunrise. The imagery of a ballet is perfect. Lovely picture to highlight your thoughts. Well done!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and lovely comments.
It's so very much appreciated! Thanks again
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This scene is very colourful and exciting and it is good to appreciate nature and your description of a tutu here is excellent as it is usually pink made of fine see-through net, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This scene is very colourful and exciting and it is good to appreciate nature and your description of a tutu here is excellent as it is usually pink made of fine see-through net, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and lovely comments.
It's so very much appreciated! Thanks again Paul, Paul
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is such a beautiful piece--vividly descriptive, through the use of very appealing personification, and conveying a message of appreciation of nature's beauties--and the Creator.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This is such a beautiful piece--vividly descriptive, through the use of very appealing personification, and conveying a message of appreciation of nature's beauties--and the Creator.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This is such a kind review and your words are as lovely as any I've ever received in a review. Thank you so very much, Janice!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I love the thought of the early morning fog being a tutu. Very creative. I enjoyed reading this well-done poem.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I love the thought of the early morning fog being a tutu. Very creative. I enjoyed reading this well-done poem.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and lovely comments. I took this picture months ago, but never really thought of it that way until I needed to use only 17 syllables to describe it. Thank you again for reviewing my poem.
Comment from Cecilia R
What a beautiful picture to go with your poem. I like your choice of words and the message it gives in so few syllables. That beauty seems to be all around us if we take the time to look. Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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What a beautiful picture to go with your poem. I like your choice of words and the message it gives in so few syllables. That beauty seems to be all around us if we take the time to look. Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and lovely comments. I took this picture months ago, but never really thought of it that way until I needed to use only 17 syllables to describe it. Thank you again for reviewing my poem.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
You did a nice job with the prompt. This is a good example of a
5-7-5, as the syllable count is correct. This is well written and well presented. The sentiment is a beautiful one.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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You did a nice job with the prompt. This is a good example of a
5-7-5, as the syllable count is correct. This is well written and well presented. The sentiment is a beautiful one.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and lovely comments. I took this picture months ago, but never really thought of it that way until I needed to use only 17 syllables to describe it. Thank you again for reviewing my poem.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is nice. I like the picture. And the theme goes perfect. In an open field, you can see much easier. This is beautiful. The peaceful feelings. The fog does not last long. It gets our attention. Thank you for the great post.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This is nice. I like the picture. And the theme goes perfect. In an open field, you can see much easier. This is beautiful. The peaceful feelings. The fog does not last long. It gets our attention. Thank you for the great post.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much Carolyn, for your very nice review and kind comments.
We are all so blessed with some amazing sunrises, sunsets and even in between. They are such gifts for our eyes! Thanks again!
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You are welcome. Good luck with the contest. I hope you win.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem with wonderful imagery
of the morning haze as the gown in a dance recital.
Excellent description that invokes peaceful thoughts.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem with wonderful imagery
of the morning haze as the gown in a dance recital.
Excellent description that invokes peaceful thoughts.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much Robert, for your very nice review and kind comments.
We are all so blessed with some amazing sunrises, sunsets and even moments in between. They are such gifts for our eyes!
Thanks again!
