Morning Dance Recital
God showing me another beautiful morning from my patio41 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Morning Dance Recital ', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it how it is. Good luck in the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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' Morning Dance Recital ', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it how it is. Good luck in the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Thank you Duchess for your very kind review and sweet comments!
You're very welcome!
Comment from juliaSjames
Love the ballet theme in this entry. It's very creative. Morning mist is lovely. Mysterious. And what a bright world is revealed when the curtain lifts. The final line is a beautiful psalm of praise to the Almighty.
Good luck in the prompt.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Love the ballet theme in this entry. It's very creative. Morning mist is lovely. Mysterious. And what a bright world is revealed when the curtain lifts. The final line is a beautiful psalm of praise to the Almighty.
Good luck in the prompt.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Thank you Julia, you are so sweet. Thanks also for the kind review and lovely comments.
Comment from l.raven
I love traveling myself...but sometimes the
most beautiful scenery is right at your front door...
my parents lived on a lot of land...and in the morning
it was so surreal to get up in the early morning...and sit on the front porch and watch the fog over the water...
and a beautiful sunrise...
I love your poem...and loveeee the picture...your colors are stunning...very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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I love traveling myself...but sometimes the
most beautiful scenery is right at your front door...
my parents lived on a lot of land...and in the morning
it was so surreal to get up in the early morning...and sit on the front porch and watch the fog over the water...
and a beautiful sunrise...
I love your poem...and loveeee the picture...your colors are stunning...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Linda thank you very much for your beautiful review and your kind words. I'm so happy that you like the poem. Thank you again. I
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your so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Debi,
I really like the imagery of your poem. Using dance, tutu, and reciting, give your a 5-7-5 a nice lyrical quality.
Great photo (I would love this view in my backyard!)
Excellent work.
Blessings, Debi.
Good luck with all your writing.
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Debi,
I really like the imagery of your poem. Using dance, tutu, and reciting, give your a 5-7-5 a nice lyrical quality.
Great photo (I would love this view in my backyard!)
Excellent work.
Blessings, Debi.
Good luck with all your writing.
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Cindy,, thank you very much for your beautiful review, and your kind comments. You are so very sweet. But I have a question for you how did you know that it was me who wrote this poem. thanks and will talk to you later
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Author, I?m sorry. I have trouble with the blind contest entry format. I pressed on your name after your review, and saw some of your work and reviewed it. It doesn?t specify blind review when one does it that way. I?m sorry x best of luck with this wonderful entry!
Cindy
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No biggie Cindy, as it certainly wasn't your fault.
If they were too worried about that, I'm sure that couldn't happen. However, I really do appreciate your lovely review.
Totally off subject, but remember us talking about our dads both being in WWll and loving to sit and watch Hogan's Heroes? The other woman's pen name that I was trying to think of is Late Bloomer. She not only has the same story as us w our dads, but is the exact same age as me. And in my biographical story, I am a ghost and goblin, I tell of my dad coming home drunk and throwing my mother down the stairs, and as a result, I was only 2 lbs. Believe it or not, the same thing happened to her mother that caused her sister to be born early.
Small world, huh?
Lol, do you mind me asking how old you are? I have a feeling that God has set us up for a reason...😉
Comment from Val Crisson
This is quite lovely, and I love the unique comparison to tutus and a pink sunrise. It has a lovely feel. I am not certain how the last line works??? Who's reciting what??? God?? I would change the last line, but it's your poem.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This is quite lovely, and I love the unique comparison to tutus and a pink sunrise. It has a lovely feel. I am not certain how the last line works??? Who's reciting what??? God?? I would change the last line, but it's your poem.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you Val for your kind review and lovely comments.
I appreciate your valuable feedback as well. I was trying to stay w the theme, and portray that the beauty of nature's dance was reciting (telling, showing, communicating, speak of) God's love.
However, I honestly welcome and am open to suggestions.
Comment from Gloria ....
Gorgeous artwork here, and a perfect pairing for your 5/7/5. I definitely looks like tulle fabric.
Fine imagery and atmosphere, and I wish you great luck with in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Gorgeous artwork here, and a perfect pairing for your 5/7/5. I definitely looks like tulle fabric.
Fine imagery and atmosphere, and I wish you great luck with in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Gloria, I thank you so very much for your kind review and lovely comments!
It is so appreciated!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
It's a nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting its theme-personified Fog with its full grandeur.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Superb!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Hello Friend,
It's a nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting its theme-personified Fog with its full grandeur.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Superb!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you so very much for your awesome review and generous six stars! You are so very kind and I can't tell you how much it's appreciated!
Thank you again!
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Friend, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Anne Johnston
"morning's tutu fog~
dances in fields and above
Reciting God's Love"
Well done on this short poem for the Nature 5-7-5 contest. I like your comparing the fog to a dance. All of nature praises God, setting us an example.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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"morning's tutu fog~
dances in fields and above
Reciting God's Love"
Well done on this short poem for the Nature 5-7-5 contest. I like your comparing the fog to a dance. All of nature praises God, setting us an example.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you Anne, so very much for your kind review and lovely comments.
It is so appreciated. Thanks again!
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You are welcome
Comment from Goosey Gander
I wish you luck in the contest! You did a fantastic job, and I love the image you chose. I also love the title :)
I especially enjoyed the last line: Reciting God's Love.
I love it.
-GG
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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I wish you luck in the contest! You did a fantastic job, and I love the image you chose. I also love the title :)
I especially enjoyed the last line: Reciting God's Love.
I love it.
-GG
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you so very much for your kind review and lovely comments.
It is so appreciated. Thanks again!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you Raul for your very kind review!
