Interpretations For Consideration
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Pipe Dreaming"An Ekphrastic Poetry Collection for NaPoWriMo 2022
14 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I'm doing my best to find the April poems I missed ~ not sure how this one got by me, but very cool that I'm finding it the day after national limerick day!
What I find so endearing in your work, Debra is not only your skill, but our sense of humor and wry wit. It's refreshing!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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I'm doing my best to find the April poems I missed ~ not sure how this one got by me, but very cool that I'm finding it the day after national limerick day!
What I find so endearing in your work, Debra is not only your skill, but our sense of humor and wry wit. It's refreshing!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Karenina :) I'm glad you enjoyed this one!
The limerick form seems to have got a hold of me these past few days - I'm in a light frame of mind :)
Best wishes to you always, Debra x
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Debra
You were lucky to find that pic to go with your poem... or, did the pic come first?
I never took to smoking. It left such an awful taste in my mouth. I do love the smell of a cigar or pipe though. I just try not breathe too much of that smoke into my lungs. I hear it causes cancer.
I enjoyed your limerick, a nice addition to your NaPoWriMo!
Your poem made me think of an episode of Jerry Seinfeld... Kramer goes on a smoking binge. His apartment is full of smoke. This is the blooper of the scene where he is trying to get Jerry to join him in having a puff. So funny!
https://youtu.be/pdDg8PYH1XI
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Hi Debra
You were lucky to find that pic to go with your poem... or, did the pic come first?
I never took to smoking. It left such an awful taste in my mouth. I do love the smell of a cigar or pipe though. I just try not breathe too much of that smoke into my lungs. I hear it causes cancer.
I enjoyed your limerick, a nice addition to your NaPoWriMo!
Your poem made me think of an episode of Jerry Seinfeld... Kramer goes on a smoking binge. His apartment is full of smoke. This is the blooper of the scene where he is trying to get Jerry to join him in having a puff. So funny!
https://youtu.be/pdDg8PYH1XI
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Hi Kimbob :)
Thanks for your feedback!
The picture came first, as with all of my posts this month ;)
Just watched the YouTube clip - funny LOL
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from pome lover
Enjoyable read.
I, in silly, younger years, tried to smoke a cigar and didn't last very long - terrible taste and much coughing.
My doctor dad smoked an occasional pipe, though, and it smelled good.
Your budding detective is most attractive and probably never breathed in on that thing. Cute limerick. Your book must be very eclectic. Interesting.
Katharine
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Enjoyable read.
I, in silly, younger years, tried to smoke a cigar and didn't last very long - terrible taste and much coughing.
My doctor dad smoked an occasional pipe, though, and it smelled good.
Your budding detective is most attractive and probably never breathed in on that thing. Cute limerick. Your book must be very eclectic. Interesting.
Katharine
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Cheers Katharine :)
I never tried a cigar or a pipe.... cigarettes though - the occasional one in my younger years (Yuck!)
Yeah, my book is a bit of a mixed bag - all held together with black and white artwork! I'm enjoying the process!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well top banana Anna looks regal smoking her Havana.
I enjoyed your fun limerick plus notes. Great job with its
style. Your words read smoothly with great imagery even
without a picture.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Well top banana Anna looks regal smoking her Havana.
I enjoyed your fun limerick plus notes. Great job with its
style. Your words read smoothly with great imagery even
without a picture.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, Jan, for your kind feedback :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Mama Baer
A fantastic limerick, Debra! I read every Sherlock Holmes book I could get my hands on when I was young. Thanks for all the information, too! Havanas reminds me of Ricky Ricardo of I Love Lucy fame. Such a handsome Cuban. I love your delightful pieces! Sending lots of good wishes!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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A fantastic limerick, Debra! I read every Sherlock Holmes book I could get my hands on when I was young. Thanks for all the information, too! Havanas reminds me of Ricky Ricardo of I Love Lucy fame. Such a handsome Cuban. I love your delightful pieces! Sending lots of good wishes!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and generous star rating! I appreciate both :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Gloria ....
A very well written limerick this is. All the inflections in all the right points, and a most entertaining read too. Your Author Notes were most useful too!
Much enjoyed and thank you for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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A very well written limerick this is. All the inflections in all the right points, and a most entertaining read too. Your Author Notes were most useful too!
Much enjoyed and thank you for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much, Gloria :) Glad you enjoyed the read... I love a limerick!
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Your title here is extremely clever Debra. It concords well with both the illustration you have chosen to examine (in the sense of just a dreamy mood)and your words (in the true sense of a pipe dream). Much enjoyed your limerick. Kate xx
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Your title here is extremely clever Debra. It concords well with both the illustration you have chosen to examine (in the sense of just a dreamy mood)and your words (in the true sense of a pipe dream). Much enjoyed your limerick. Kate xx
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging feedback, Kate :) Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever Limerick here with a lovely bounce to it and I loved the sentiment here too Debra, this girl even has the smoking jacket to match her pipe and cigars, he he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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A clever Limerick here with a lovely bounce to it and I loved the sentiment here too Debra, this girl even has the smoking jacket to match her pipe and cigars, he he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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LOL! So she does! Thank you so much, Dolly, for your kind feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from juliaSjames
Hahaha
A clever and creative limerick that reflects the essence of the artwork. Nothing but the best for high flyer Anna!
I'd forgotten that usage of smoking a pipe so I appreciated your helpful author notes
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Hahaha
A clever and creative limerick that reflects the essence of the artwork. Nothing but the best for high flyer Anna!
I'd forgotten that usage of smoking a pipe so I appreciated your helpful author notes
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, Julia :) I appreciate your kind feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from jessizero
This is a great poem. I like the limerick form it took. I got the Sherlock Holmes vibe from the picture, too. Thanks for sharing this here! Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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This is a great poem. I like the limerick form it took. I got the Sherlock Holmes vibe from the picture, too. Thanks for sharing this here! Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much, Jessi :) Best wishes, Debra
