A Muddle Made With Love
My favorite dessert, whatever it is.3 total reviews
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
A very cute poem and picture. Nice to know how much you appreciate mom even though she makes mistake. Or maybe your the mom? Regardless it's a great job and I wish you you all the best in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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A very cute poem and picture. Nice to know how much you appreciate mom even though she makes mistake. Or maybe your the mom? Regardless it's a great job and I wish you you all the best in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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I am not a mom myself and my own mother has been dead for over 50 years, so this poem is just an imaginary one, but written in homage to mothers everywhere who try hard for their families.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
At least your mother tried. And that is what matters the most. It is hard telling your mother her dessert tastes terrible. Especially when you are grown. Thank you for sharing this poem that has happened to many of us. Have a great day, and Easter.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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At least your mother tried. And that is what matters the most. It is hard telling your mother her dessert tastes terrible. Especially when you are grown. Thank you for sharing this poem that has happened to many of us. Have a great day, and Easter.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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It wasn't that the dessert tasted terrible, it just looked a mess. We were always grateful to have any sort of dessert.
Thanks for reviewing. Happy Easter!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces culinary activities effected with overt defects; but lovingly carried out to the end by the baker.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of alliterations, assonance and onomatopoeia.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces culinary activities effected with overt defects; but lovingly carried out to the end by the baker.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of alliterations, assonance and onomatopoeia.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks very much for these lovely comments.
Happy Easter to you!
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Remain Blessed.
