Yum!
Poem 5/7/514 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 on desert, Yum!, has the proper formatting and brings out Gramma's apple pie to get the win at the 5-7-5 favorite desert challenge.
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This 5-7-5 on desert, Yum!, has the proper formatting and brings out Gramma's apple pie to get the win at the 5-7-5 favorite desert challenge.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very nicely done. That said, you may want to consider using and to start line three, such as "and a cup of that." Grandma would have used both. Still, it works but what I say is truthful. This is ok but that makes it complete. :-)
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Very nicely done. That said, you may want to consider using and to start line three, such as "and a cup of that." Grandma would have used both. Still, it works but what I say is truthful. This is ok but that makes it complete. :-)
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
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Great -thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Wendy G
I bet the secret ingredient (or probably not so secret) was love. But they did often keep there exact recipes a secret, tantalising others! Beautiful 5-7-5, and lovely photo. Best wishes.
Wendy
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I bet the secret ingredient (or probably not so secret) was love. But they did often keep there exact recipes a secret, tantalising others! Beautiful 5-7-5, and lovely photo. Best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
You did a nice job with the prompt, very creative.
The syllable count is correct and the formatting is also. The photo is a perfect choice. The topic reminds me of fall.
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You did a nice job with the prompt, very creative.
The syllable count is correct and the formatting is also. The photo is a perfect choice. The topic reminds me of fall.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Apple pie is not only a delicious treat--one that grandmas take pride in--but also an unofficial symbol of America, like baseball.
Creative use of your syllables
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Apple pie is not only a delicious treat--one that grandmas take pride in--but also an unofficial symbol of America, like baseball.
Creative use of your syllables
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a lovely haiku, telling the story of Grandma's baking. She also had "a shake or two" and "just a wee bit" of a "generous portion." I've tried Grandma's recipes more than once! Good luck in the contest.
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This is a lovely haiku, telling the story of Grandma's baking. She also had "a shake or two" and "just a wee bit" of a "generous portion." I've tried Grandma's recipes more than once! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore apple pie and my Auntie Eve's apple pie was the best, she attended cookery classes and when she made an apple pie it was to die for, I loved the pinch or two of this or handful of that, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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I adore apple pie and my Auntie Eve's apple pie was the best, she attended cookery classes and when she made an apple pie it was to die for, I loved the pinch or two of this or handful of that, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Yum', looks wonderfully edible. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you got on?
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'Yum', looks wonderfully edible. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you got on?
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
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zanya, you're very welcome.
Bless you,
the Duchess
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
Grandmas's baking is always the best - so comforting and full of love (and this and that!)
Your poem is yummy and in good form.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Hello :)
Grandmas's baking is always the best - so comforting and full of love (and this and that!)
Your poem is yummy and in good form.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
That picture looks real. And your poem is great. My husband loved apple pie with vanilla ice cream on top. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend and Easter.
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That picture looks real. And your poem is great. My husband loved apple pie with vanilla ice cream on top. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend and Easter.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
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You are welcome.
