Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

The htlm after Haiku in title is easy error to correct and distracts from this poem.

Wolves are my favorite animals, and poem captures the playfulness of the pups spot on.

Strong 5-7-5.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022

Thank you so much for letting me know about the gremlins in my poem. I will go and remove those as soon as possible. I appreciate your comments and review.

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

The alliteration of b's is effective to create an intended supposed intimidating sense. There is nice juxtaposition in this poem. Inspite of a possible threat, they are cute.
Well done.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022

Thank you, Liz. They are quite adorable!

reply by Liz O'Neill on 11-Apr-2022

I was honored to have a beautiful, muscular wolf run right in front of me about 50 ft from my car on the way home one night.

reply by Liz O'Neill on 11-Apr-2022

I was honored to have a beautiful, muscular wolf run right in front of me about 50 ft from my car on the way home one night.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Awwww. Even your use of all lower case speaks to the "baby" theme!
An adorable picture in the photo and the word-painting... I hope no one kicks this little pup!

Karenina

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

When I was a kid, I always wanted a wolf pup. My mom talked me out of it with a little red riding hood story. Ha ha

reply by karenina on 11-Apr-2022

Ha Ha, indeed! That fairy tale, like so MANY, scared me to death! (What were those authors thinking???)
LOL...

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Baby animal (haikuâ?¦) Are you afraid? *haiku*
The Big, Bad Wolf
by Leann DS

I love your baby animal haiku. The wolf cubs are so adorable. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation. I like the satori reference to the big bad wolf. Well done.

how come you didn't enter this one in the haiku club? it would be perfect for the challenge.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

I thought I did enter it in the haiku club. That's why I wrote it? I think this happened to me one other time when I tried to do something for a club. I'm not sure what I'm doing incorrectly. Oh well, I'll keep trying. Maybe someday I'll get it right.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review! Hugs.

reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 10-Apr-2022

No worries, it happens sometimes :)

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This made wolves seem adorable, not scary. You did a great job with the "baby animal haiku." Thanks for choosing to share this here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

Thank you. They are adorable? And then they grow up. I guess sometimes they could stay adorable, but I'm not gonna chance it. Ha ha

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

Thank you. They are adorable? And then they grow up. I guess sometimes they could stay adorable, but I'm not gonna chance it. Ha ha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Pups are fun and innocent and soon become aware and change into predators, but for now they romp about enjoying life and unaware of dangers, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

My sentiments exactly. If only we could all stay that young! :-) Thank you so much for reviewing and reading my poem.

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

My sentiments exactly. If only we could all stay that young! :-) Thank you so much for reviewing and reading my poem.